on Momma, don't let your pipebombs grow up to be Jewish by Bachus
19 Aug 2003, 8:55 AM
I am currently a Marine in Afghanistan. I came here with an attitude that I would eventually uderstand the people here better. I do understand them now. They are fatalistic and thick headed. None of them help one another or themselves. There is nothing but self pity in this country, and hatred for the rest of the world. I know that as soon as the UN forces leave this country the locals will put their women on leashes again, and all will be as it was again. I apologize for ranting. I enjoyed your uninhibited poem. (9)
on null by Bill Z Bub
18 Aug 2003, 9:59 AM
mmmmm...poon tang. A wonderful flowing description of the girl that is intermingled with the act itself. They are one and the same. Excellent, it read smoothly.
on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub
18 Aug 2003, 9:54 AM
I like your imagery. I like how it appeals to several of the senses.
on Fuck Me Like Love Fucks Me (changed) by Son Of A Bitch
15 Aug 2003, 12:29 PM
Very good. It set off my turrets. I like the way it flows. I enjoyed every word. I can't stand poems that have lots of filler. People concentrate too much on an attractive presentation and end up putting too much pen to paper.
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on Memory by Hostileintent
15 Aug 2003, 12:12 PM
I like this one
I hope you don't die
I hope you see the grinning monkey
That's hiding on your back
Tell him to fuck off
He's got the wrong guy
(8)
I hope you don't die
I hope you see the grinning monkey
That's hiding on your back
Tell him to fuck off
He's got the wrong guy
(8)
on Dolly was a damn fine lamb by <{Baba^Yaga}>
9 Aug 2003, 10:42 AM
Very nice.
on Nigger Hole by horus8
6 Aug 2003, 10:18 AM
It set off my turettes...Thankyou.
on LIVE FROM CHEYENNE,WY. "The Forgeters!" by horus8
6 Aug 2003, 9:56 AM
Here is a forward from a book, Grass Sandals about
Basho
"Traditionally, poems in the form called haiku are
characterized by seventeen sylable broken into three
lines with five, seven, and five syllable
respectively. Each haiku includes language that
appeals to two of the five senses - sight, hearing,
smell, touch, and taste, or the additional sense of
movement."
Basho
"Traditionally, poems in the form called haiku are
characterized by seventeen sylable broken into three
lines with five, seven, and five syllable
respectively. Each haiku includes language that
appeals to two of the five senses - sight, hearing,
smell, touch, and taste, or the additional sense of
movement."
on Fish by http://findingwater
5 Aug 2003, 12:08 PM
My brand of wierd. Smell ya later.
on Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
4 Aug 2003, 10:26 AM
This haiku made me hungry. Jelouse of the satisfied man on the beach.
on War Begins on Tuesday by Nicholas Jones
4 Aug 2003, 10:25 AM
Opinionated. How much do you know?
replying on Clay Man by eliastemplar
4 Aug 2003, 10:18 AM
There are deffinately stereotypes associated with Marines, but we come from all walks of life. My fellow Marines nick named me Smokejumper because I used to be a fire fighter for the Forrestry Service.
I'll admit that I'm not a typical Marine. However, I think you'd be hard pressed to accurately define the typical Marine.
Thanks for the comments,
Lcpl.Busby,B.W.
I'll admit that I'm not a typical Marine. However, I think you'd be hard pressed to accurately define the typical Marine.
Thanks for the comments,
Lcpl.Busby,B.W.
on Paintball's Flight by loneshadow29
4 Aug 2003, 5:07 AM
You make paintball seem so beautiful. I feel a lump in my throat.
on Cussedness by Nicholas Jones
3 Aug 2003, 6:02 PM
Humerous. Black.
on Revelation ( 666 ) by Mr Pig
3 Aug 2003, 12:24 PM
I can't paint a picture with it.
on The Dark one's 2000th comment by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Aug 2003, 12:24 PM
An extra point for including an air bisquit.
on Crucifixion by Mr Pig
3 Aug 2003, 12:17 PM
4-7-6
on Pilgrimage by Christof
1 Aug 2003, 8:13 PM
What a queer ending. I don't associate the sense of loss and rememberance with a person, but the hopeful dreams we've had and left behind, the familiar places in our minds.
Thanks,
Lcpl.Busby
Thanks,
Lcpl.Busby