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Fish (Free verse) by http://findingwater
Today, the sea smelled of fish. Yesterday, the sea smelled of fish. Two weeks ago, the sea smelled of fish. The dream: The sea was absent; floated into the universe I guess, but the smell had gone and the fish had legs. Man, were they fast! Just now, I passed the fresh meat section of the supermarket. The fish smelled of the sea.

Up the ladder: On Someone's Dick
Down the ladder: Phantom Space Adventure

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 5.336177
Overall Rank: 3453
Posted: August 4, 2003 6:07 PM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2003 6:07 PM PDT
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[8] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.145.66 | 4-Aug-03/6:10 PM | Reply
Interesting dream, coming from a vegetarian. Were they more appetizing with legs?
[7] <~> @ 64.252.48.242 | 4-Aug-03/6:33 PM | Reply
smelly, but not salty?
[7] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 4-Aug-03/7:50 PM | Reply
Ha ha... So did my date. Her chest smelled of the Sea. Her trap of fish.
[10] eliastemplar @ 216.147.132.7 | 5-Aug-03/12:08 PM | Reply
My brand of wierd. Smell ya later.
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