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Fish (Free verse) by http://findingwater
Today,
the sea smelled of fish.
Yesterday,
the sea smelled of fish.
Two weeks ago,
the sea smelled of fish.
The dream:
The sea was absent;
floated into the universe I guess,
but the smell had gone and
the fish had legs.
Man, were they fast!
Just now,
I passed the fresh meat section of the supermarket.
The fish smelled of the sea.
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Posted: August 4, 2003 6:07 PM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2003 6:07 PM PDT
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