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Fish

by http://findingwater

Member since 2003 · Posted 4 Aug 2003 · 4 comments

Today, the sea smelled of fish. Yesterday, the sea smelled of fish. Two weeks ago, the sea smelled of fish. The dream: The sea was absent; floated into the universe I guess, but the smell had gone and the fish had legs. Man, were they fast! Just now, I passed the fresh meat section of the supermarket. The fish smelled of the sea.

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[8] http://mulberryfairy 4-Aug-03/6:10 PM Reply
Interesting dream, coming from a vegetarian. Were they more appetizing with legs?
[7] <~> 4-Aug-03/6:33 PM Reply
smelly, but not salty?
[7] Shardik 4-Aug-03/7:50 PM Reply
Ha ha... So did my date. Her chest smelled of the Sea. Her trap of fish.
[10] eliastemplar 5-Aug-03/12:08 PM Reply
My brand of wierd. Smell ya later.