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Fish (Free verse) by http://findingwater

Today, the sea smelled of fish. Yesterday, the sea smelled of fish. Two weeks ago, the sea smelled of fish. The dream: The sea was absent; floated into the universe I guess, but the smell had gone and the fish had legs. Man, were they fast! Just now, I passed the fresh meat section of the supermarket. The fish smelled of the sea.

<~> 4-Aug-03/6:33 PM
smelly, but not salty?




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