| Re: a comment on Aluminum Shackles - Titanium Quills by SupremeDreamer |
4-Oct-03/11:23 AM |
The comment debate is not what i was speaking of Darkie, and you know that. ;)
Its not my use of cooking terms.. perhaps you'd like to visit your recent suggestions?
I like making scenes and frontpage headlines darkie, cmon now- this should have been obviouse for some time.
But- you do too, in your own subtle way.. i could give a shit about cuisine vs culinary or the use of the almighty dictionary.
I enjoy the act of arguing, etc. Anyway- I got other things to do, a room to clean and a house to make livable again, so toodles.
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| Re: a comment on Anti-Rhymer [translation included] by Y2kSlamPoet |
20-Sep-03/12:50 PM |
ive had much experience and practice.
Never underestimate me, i can spark lightning
from time to time.
:)
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| Re: a comment on Spider Meth Adventure by Y2kSlamPoet |
20-Sep-03/12:47 PM |
no, i dont tolerate spiders very well.. -shrug-
they can die while i reep the fruits of war.
im their creator, so they will obey!!
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| Re: a comment on Spider Meth Adventure by Y2kSlamPoet |
20-Sep-03/12:45 PM |
well, im 18.. so he sounds like an imbecile, no chance of me taking his bab to heart.
lol.. you should do a series..
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| Re: a comment on Shakespearean Sonnets & Poets by Y2kSlamPoet |
20-Sep-03/12:40 PM |
shakespear bores the hell out of me...
so.. sugar coated..
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| Re: a comment on Unemployment Lining by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
19-Sep-03/8:29 AM |
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cozy, wonderful place to have a barbeque, i hear that protestant meat is the best, (catholics are a bit bitter)
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| Re: a comment on Being Called Dave by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
19-Sep-03/8:27 AM |
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| Re: A Fractured Egg Shell by newdawnfades |
19-Sep-03/8:05 AM |
HUMPTY DUMPTY JUMPED OFF THE EMPIRE STATE BUILDING
scrambled eggs for breakfast, shell fragments saved to be used as toothpicks.
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| Re: a comment on Unemployment Lining by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
19-Sep-03/7:55 AM |
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I think he built his house with crucifixs and golden twine. (if you look carefully, one of the crucifixs has a mexican hobo freshly nailed to it, some sort of ritual or something, i forget.)
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| Re: Emotion Expression by Hostileintent |
19-Sep-03/7:41 AM |
open up.. or shrivel inwards, become dry and cracked: a mummy waiting to turn to dust.
my mother had the same kind of problem.. unable to express emotion.
The woman never looked happy (unless it was a dinner party, she was an A+ actor.. not many had a fucking clue)
blessed with eight.
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| Re: Boys with Guns by Hostileintent |
19-Sep-03/7:36 AM |
I have heard of, and have seen such a picture.. not pleasant.
the repetition makes it seem like your starting to stammer, as if gripped by anxiety or nervouseness.. at first i thought it out of place, but then you mentioned that you lived in such a place, and it made sense..
was that the purpose? or was it simply done to give more force to emotion? (im all curiouse this morning)
overall, 8
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| Re: a comment on Wit and Eloquence by Lifeboatman |
19-Sep-03/3:01 AM |
well.. when did this vendetta start?
*
i see two reasonably intelligent poets "text fighting" via the internet.. how about you two meet up, i come by with a camcorder, and everyone will be able to see you two beat eachother into bloody slushies in full vivid animation and color!
it looks like one of those common bickering sessions i have with darkie.. cept.. somehow more idiotic.
-shrug-
[note: keep a look out for more fights, this shit is amusing.. sure fills the late hours of my life with entertainment.]
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| Re: Danuta by deep-as-a-puddle |
1-Sep-03/6:48 AM |
-Think happy thoughts johnnie-
can you get any cuter? 4
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| Re: Shi by William Delacroix |
1-Sep-03/6:46 AM |
ok ok, nice detail, nice twisted humor with the introduction of the wife.. but i still think its a failed poet glorifying his shame that resulted in suicide lol..
and how the fuck does he accomplish making an impact?
i can imagine headlines:
"Crazy Poet Slices Stomach To End His Hunger."
that doesnt make an impact.. it makes parents scared when their child comes out of his/her room and says "i want to be a poet mommy and daddy!" in the morning right after they read the headline.
"Be a lawyer honey"
despite that, this poem deserves an 8 in my opinion, doesnt get a 9 because of the so called purpose of the poets bloody and painfull suicide.
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| Re: death by crwncka1 |
28-Aug-03/3:03 PM |
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title sucks.. death is a dead subject, it takes a master to give it life, your not fit for the job.. 0
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| Re: Naughty Word Game by kthay |
28-Aug-03/2:59 PM |
.. if your goal was to capture the mental workings of children, then ok, im not going to step on this.. because you did it well.. the cute innocence and crap..
but cmon, couldnt you insert a "goddamn it" or "shit".. ok, ok, im being picky.. -sigh-
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| Re: Easter Egg Soup by kthay |
28-Aug-03/2:57 PM |
hrmm.. childish.. makes me wonder: didnt your remember that the sun exists, and that its hot? do you remember that chocolate tends to melt when heated?..
slightly funny though.. ill give you that.
5.
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| Re: $ by Crakyamuni |
28-Aug-03/2:54 PM |
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and you dare to belittle my poems? crawl back into your fucking hole you worthless fraud. 0
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| Re: opening time? by wormsy |
28-Aug-03/2:52 PM |
short, sweet.. but im left hanging.. why?
tip: if your going to do miniatures.. make sure you dont leave any holes in the paper when you turn it in.
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| Re: The Shack by Domus |
28-Aug-03/2:51 PM |
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no.. this doesnt do it.. i didnt think my I'm Back poem could be made worse or done in a crappier fashion.. but you convinced me.. really.. what the hell was the purpose in making this poem? 0
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