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$ (Free verse) by Crakyamuni Fallen from the rift
Product of the terror
all celebrated beamed and rose
death is forever
Despondent vicious tense
Abstraction of the terror
your satiation is complete
lies are forever
Up the ladder:
"E-V-O-L"
Down the ladder:
Mr. Moldmakerman
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Posted: August 28, 2003 11:51 AM PDT; Last modified: August 28, 2003 12:10 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.672192 Overall Rank: 12200 Comments:
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Don-Quixote @ 66.81.156.79
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28-Aug-03/2:54 PM
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and you dare to belittle my poems? crawl back into your fucking hole you worthless fraud. 0
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Crakyamuni @ 12.83.71.165
> Don-Quixote
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28-Aug-03/3:35 PM
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I challenge thee to a duel, mesieur.0
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Y2kSlamPoet @ 66.81.156.79
> Crakyamuni
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28-Aug-03/4:20 PM
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what.. your going to duel me with your 8th grade remarks.. *laugh* oh please.. your not worth the time, or effort, and i wouldnt enjoy beating on the retarded and sexually depraved.
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