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opening time? (Free verse) by wormsy Doctor Foster went to Gloucester
on a stolen bus
but when he got there the shops were shut
and his eyes were full of pus
Up the ladder:
Watercolor Afternoon
Down the ladder:
Dream
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Posted: August 28, 2003 11:46 AM PDT; Last modified: August 28, 2003 11:46 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.910598 Overall Rank: 9569 Comments:
short, sweet.. but im left hanging.. why?
tip: if your going to do miniatures.. make sure you dont leave any holes in the paper when you turn it in. 5
I've always assumed that, in the original, the half rhyme was meant to imply that really Dr. Foster had stepped in a piddle right up to his middle, and it was in fact a sewage related incident.
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Set up well but flounders, why are his eyes full of puss?