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wormsy
Doctor Foster went to Gloucester on a stolen bus but when he got there the shops were shut and his eyes were full of pus
richa
28-Aug-03/1:39 PM
like the first two lines, admittedly the first is nicked.
Set up well but flounders, why are his eyes full of puss?
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