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Dream (Free verse) by silvy Tick...Tick...Tick...
Hours to Hours....Minutes to Minutes....Seconds to Seconds..
I'm still counting...
Day by days.... Months by months... Year by years...
I'm still waiting...
I'm still hoping...
Waiting for the miracle comes..
Hoping for reaching the star.
Tick....tick...tick....
I'm still listening...
I'm still watching...
Listening to the wind blows...
watching to the blue sky...
thinking that someday, I can flying and reaching the star.
Up the ladder:
opening time?
Down the ladder:
celluloid cellophane
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Posted: September 11, 2003 9:02 PM PDT; Last modified: September 11, 2003 9:02 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.910598 Overall Rank: 9570 Comments:
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silvy @ 68.50.10.82
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11-Sep-03/9:03 PM
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I've just want to know about my rank for this poem, so I can more improve in writing. thanks.
Would you rather have grammatical feedback than numerical scores?
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