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Dream (Free verse) by silvy

Tick...Tick...Tick... Hours to Hours....Minutes to Minutes....Seconds to Seconds.. I'm still counting... Day by days.... Months by months... Year by years... I'm still waiting... I'm still hoping... Waiting for the miracle comes.. Hoping for reaching the star. Tick....tick...tick.... I'm still listening... I'm still watching... Listening to the wind blows... watching to the blue sky... thinking that someday, I can flying and reaching the star.

http://mulberryfairy 12-Sep-03/10:30 AM
Would you rather have grammatical feedback than numerical scores?




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