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Watercolor Afternoon (Free verse) by libby_28
Join me for an afternoon in the watercolor.
Blue colors of the river will ease us:
Sit in the painted boat, that is what I do.
Take a load off your feet under the tree.
You see, it is only as hard as we make it.
You and me, are you having a good time?
The white clouds in the blue sky
The brush strokes of a ripple in the river,
The majestic tree with sponge painted leaves-
Let this scene relax you.
Feel the fresh breeze on your back,
The rock back-and-forth in the boat,
The tingle sensations in your nose of smell-
This is good isnât it?
What life is made of? Of course.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9573
Posted: July 28, 2003 9:32 PM PDT; Last modified: July 28, 2003 9:32 PM PDT
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