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death (Free verse) by crwncka1 I hear a bird chirping,
faintly from the far,
I look outside to see,
nothing but darkness there,
something inside tells me,
that I have arrived,
to a place,
where time means nothing,
everything is silent now,
my soul has cleared,
all the useless air,
back home from the far,
to rest in peace
Up the ladder:
ungle stop
Down the ladder:
Virgin Bride
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Posted: August 28, 2003 2:02 PM PDT; Last modified: August 28, 2003 2:02 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.1035285 Overall Rank: 13307 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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28-Aug-03/2:18 PM
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I like how you made me say thar, but that was quick lived.1.
title sucks.. death is a dead subject, it takes a master to give it life, your not fit for the job.. 0
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