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Danuta (Free verse) by deep-as-a-puddle
I love feeling this worlds ups and downs
I love the grimaces, the smiles, the frowns
I had everything to loose
and i gladly lost it all for you
But now i can feel my face again
i can see the smiles and hear the laughs again
The rain has stopped pounding my skin
and so the blossoming of the flowers must soon begin
you reach out your hand and try to drag me back to the shadows
but im long gone, frolicking through springs medows
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.8
Weighted score: 4.7377534
Overall Rank: 11733
Posted: September 1, 2003 6:43 AM PDT; Last modified: September 1, 2003 6:43 AM PDT
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can you get any cuter? 4