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Danuta (Free verse) by deep-as-a-puddle
I love feeling this worlds ups and downs I love the grimaces, the smiles, the frowns I had everything to loose and i gladly lost it all for you But now i can feel my face again i can see the smiles and hear the laughs again The rain has stopped pounding my skin and so the blossoming of the flowers must soon begin you reach out your hand and try to drag me back to the shadows but im long gone, frolicking through springs medows

Up the ladder: ooohhh...subs
Down the ladder: A Chance to Say Goodbye

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.8
Weighted score: 4.7377534
Overall Rank: 11733
Posted: September 1, 2003 6:43 AM PDT; Last modified: September 1, 2003 6:43 AM PDT
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[4] Don-Quixote @ 204.31.169.101 | 1-Sep-03/6:48 AM | Reply
-Think happy thoughts johnnie-

can you get any cuter? 4
[5] Jill Stockinger @ 127.0.0.1 | 27-Dec-20/4:28 PM | Reply
world's ; to lose (not loose);
sounds stiff: "so the blossoming of the flowers must soon begin"- spring's meadows
--Liked the last 2 lines!
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