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untitled # 2 (Free verse) by noonewantstobealone
The rest of the world
- everyone outside of this room -
just doesn't care.
It's so much easier to pretend we don't exist.
Hide us until we're better -
No matter how many pills you have to prescribe!
And don't forget therapy on the hour.
I guess I'm sorry.
Sorry that we aren't good enough.
I wasn't trying to embarrass you when I said,
"It's a comfort to soak a towel with my blood."
I know, I can't show you.
I'm sorry.
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Posted: October 26, 2003 7:38 PM PST; Last modified: October 26, 2003 7:38 PM PST
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