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untitled # 2 (Free verse) by noonewantstobealone
The rest of the world - everyone outside of this room - just doesn't care. It's so much easier to pretend we don't exist. Hide us until we're better - No matter how many pills you have to prescribe! And don't forget therapy on the hour. I guess I'm sorry. Sorry that we aren't good enough. I wasn't trying to embarrass you when I said, "It's a comfort to soak a towel with my blood." I know, I can't show you. I'm sorry.

Up the ladder: The Hermit
Down the ladder: Toy Story

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.8
Weighted score: 4.7377534
Overall Rank: 11736
Posted: October 26, 2003 7:38 PM PST; Last modified: October 26, 2003 7:38 PM PST
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[4] baphomet @ 24.126.116.54 | 26-Oct-03/8:38 PM | Reply
oh let me guess, Inspired by the time Fifi went in the car motor for heat.
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