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Danuta (Free verse) by deep-as-a-puddle

I love feeling this worlds ups and downs I love the grimaces, the smiles, the frowns I had everything to loose and i gladly lost it all for you But now i can feel my face again i can see the smiles and hear the laughs again The rain has stopped pounding my skin and so the blossoming of the flowers must soon begin you reach out your hand and try to drag me back to the shadows but im long gone, frolicking through springs medows

Jill Stockinger 27-Dec-20/4:28 PM
world's ; to lose (not loose);
sounds stiff: "so the blossoming of the flowers must soon begin"- spring's meadows
--Liked the last 2 lines!




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