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The Shack (Free verse) by Domus (basketball)
I'm like a rap star
Shack Daddy
You want ho's?
I don't need no bar
like Dennis R.
I got'em near and far
Shack Daddy.
Nigger,
Ain't nobody bigger!
Walton, you couldn't make my bed.
I got a helmet for a head.
Land under me, and you're dead.
Shack Daddy.
Nigger,
Ain't nobody bigger!
I ain't no fatty
Check me out in my escalade
I got it made!
Bitches want me for my waddy
Hundred dollar bills, wrapped tight
Like Mark Maddy.
Head shaved, I'm lookin natty
Drive you white folks batty
You think I'm bratty?
Kiss my asshole everyday
and twice on friday.
Motha fukka
I'm Shack Daddy!
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Posted: August 28, 2003 11:44 AM PDT; Last modified: August 28, 2003 11:44 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.6414113 Overall Rank: 12395 Comments:
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Don-Quixote @ 66.81.156.79
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28-Aug-03/2:51 PM
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no.. this doesnt do it.. i didnt think my I'm Back poem could be made worse or done in a crappier fashion.. but you convinced me.. really.. what the hell was the purpose in making this poem? 0
Sounded good to me. I hate that fucking nigger. And I fucking hate escalades and basketball.
this is awesome 9
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