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The Shack (Free verse) by Domus
(basketball) I'm like a rap star Shack Daddy You want ho's? I don't need no bar like Dennis R. I got'em near and far Shack Daddy. Nigger, Ain't nobody bigger! Walton, you couldn't make my bed. I got a helmet for a head. Land under me, and you're dead. Shack Daddy. Nigger, Ain't nobody bigger! I ain't no fatty Check me out in my escalade I got it made! Bitches want me for my waddy Hundred dollar bills, wrapped tight Like Mark Maddy. Head shaved, I'm lookin natty Drive you white folks batty You think I'm bratty? Kiss my asshole everyday and twice on friday. Motha fukka I'm Shack Daddy!

Down the ladder: When the World Forgets

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.6414113
Overall Rank: 12400
Posted: August 28, 2003 11:44 AM PDT; Last modified: August 28, 2003 11:44 AM PDT
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[0] Don-Quixote @ 66.81.156.79 | 28-Aug-03/2:51 PM | Reply
no.. this doesnt do it.. i didnt think my I'm Back poem could be made worse or done in a crappier fashion.. but you convinced me.. really.. what the hell was the purpose in making this poem? 0
[9] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 28-Aug-03/2:55 PM | Reply
Sounded good to me. I hate that fucking nigger. And I fucking hate escalades and basketball.
[9] patty t @ 70.30.214.253 | 26-Apr-06/5:12 PM | Reply
this is awesome 9
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