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The Shack (Free verse) by Domus

(basketball) I'm like a rap star Shack Daddy You want ho's? I don't need no bar like Dennis R. I got'em near and far Shack Daddy. Nigger, Ain't nobody bigger! Walton, you couldn't make my bed. I got a helmet for a head. Land under me, and you're dead. Shack Daddy. Nigger, Ain't nobody bigger! I ain't no fatty Check me out in my escalade I got it made! Bitches want me for my waddy Hundred dollar bills, wrapped tight Like Mark Maddy. Head shaved, I'm lookin natty Drive you white folks batty You think I'm bratty? Kiss my asshole everyday and twice on friday. Motha fukka I'm Shack Daddy!

Don-Quixote 28-Aug-03/2:51 PM
no.. this doesnt do it.. i didnt think my I'm Back poem could be made worse or done in a crappier fashion.. but you convinced me.. really.. what the hell was the purpose in making this poem? 0




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