Re: Reckoning by <~>	9-Jan-06/7:40 PM
powerful and real- I'm totally believing it. I like the lightness and how you play it with the reality that it is serious and painful, too.
Re: Uncontrolled scribblings one luch break by Nicholas Jones	9-Jan-06/7:36 PM
I didn't get this use of "retain" False snow on an allotment to retain, perhaps or to retain warmth sorry for being so traditionalist, but the "+" and the date were eyesores it was good in spite of all that.
Re: [] by Prince of Void	9-Jan-06/7:32 PM
why not spell out p.o.v.- we had to scroll to the right anyway for the honking last line
Re: The Dark Days of Aristotle by somemorepoetry	9-Jan-06/7:26 PM
nice plot twist
Re: Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT	9-Jan-06/7:22 PM
2nd to last line- sun's These are excellent. It IS good to be like moss. Are you still in transit? How do you find time to write so much? Do you drive around with a phrase in your head all day until you get to take a break, then scramble to get it on paper?
Re: We'll be right back after these messages by INTRANSIT	8-Jan-06/6:18 PM
when will you obey?
Re: a comment on Pledge by http://mulberryfairy	8-Jan-06/6:14 PM
Alas, I am the asker- a social worker, no less.
Re: The Healing Species by Dovina	8-Jan-06/6:52 AM
intelligent, relevant, and well written
Re: Toasting To Our Wedding Night by Beyond_Dreams	8-Jan-06/6:50 AM
I almost didn't read because of the title, but it was worth it (both your choice of title and the read).
Re: a love not meant to be by nentwined	29-Jul-05/10:45 PM
nice job- you really captured the simultaneous hope and awareness of flaws that we bring to relationships
Re: Requiem by ChaseValentine	30-Apr-05/3:22 PM
Beautiful and full of resolve.
Re: Sins of convenience by sunset sky	30-Apr-05/3:18 PM
I liked it all, including last stanza.
Re: Walking Out by NoSage	30-Apr-05/3:12 PM
submit this to an NA meditation book
Re: a comment on Untitled by http://mulberryfairy	30-Apr-05/3:09 PM
Thanks. I don't want to narrow it down that much, because I am trying to convey this undercurrent of conception/life/birth here, too. Did it come through at all?
Re: a comment on Untitled by http://mulberryfairy	28-Apr-05/8:29 PM
Luckily, in Maine, we have domestic partner benefits, regardless.
Re: Prayer For The Church by sliver	28-Apr-05/8:27 PM
What's outrageous? Papal praise is What's disgusting? Condom bustin' What's outrageous? Celebate priests is What's forbidden? alter boy smitten What do we want? Condoms! When do we want 'em? Now!
Re: Lost key for a hall-closet by zodiac	28-Apr-05/8:09 PM
Loved this part "Then she's tucked, like laundry wearing rumpled laundry, in the old crotchless, scallops..." I got the sexual undertone, though not the way you intended it; I was thinking the key was a metaphor for some masturbation tool at the end.
Re: L'Étoile by Shardik	28-Apr-05/8:04 PM
yes quite
Re: Fingers Are Soldiers by somemorepoetry	28-Apr-05/7:59 PM
fine writing
Re: a comment on Untitled by http://mulberryfairy	28-Apr-05/7:56 PM
I don't take sides.