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The Dark Days of Aristotle (Free verse) by somemorepoetry
That long stretch of metal breaking
Is the sound of ages of man falling apart.
He was here, looking out the window,
Watching the machines grab at
The I-beams, the girders and chains.
Where thereâs smoke, thereâs fire, he said
Together with his long name and
Cigarette brand.
So I moved closer to watch
The men pulling levers, raking shards;
I felt his breath against me, and I squirmed
At the thought of him looking,
His hand thinking of running north
Towards everything he ever really wanted.
Today, he said at my neck back, Iâll look
For another place to live.
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Posted: January 9, 2006 4:41 PM PST; Last modified: January 9, 2006 4:41 PM PST
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