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Toasting To Our Wedding Night (Free verse) by Beyond_Dreams Everyone has a story,
Like a perfect murder
without reason, just a
perfect Thought for the
perfect occasion.
Perfectly in-love.
It doesn't require
anything except giving
as much as you can.
Even the memory of
gripping the
throat is eternal.
Hands rocked by the cold
serrated flesh dangling
like a graceful beauty;
awakened
to another eternity.
Even the silence of
the cold reminds me
of taking the last sip
of froth.
Like the Kiss of innocence;
You,
sipping and listening,
unveiling memories
of the time, that required
giving in
to the silence.
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Posted: January 6, 2006 11:14 PM PST; Last modified: January 6, 2006 11:14 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.313765 Overall Rank: 3565 Comments:
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http://mulberryfairy @ 64.222.209.137
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8-Jan-06/6:50 AM
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I almost didn't read because of the title, but it was worth it (both your choice of title and the read).
âwedding nightâ and âmurderâ an interesting combination, makes for an interesting poem. It gets a little eerie and ends well ~ much like the combination. Nice format of the stanzas.
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