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Toasting To Our Wedding Night (Free verse) by Beyond_Dreams
Everyone has a story, Like a perfect murder without reason, just a perfect Thought for the perfect occasion. Perfectly in-love. It doesn't require anything except giving as much as you can. Even the memory of gripping the throat is eternal. Hands rocked by the cold serrated flesh dangling like a graceful beauty; awakened to another eternity. Even the silence of the cold reminds me of taking the last sip of froth. Like the Kiss of innocence; You, sipping and listening, unveiling memories of the time, that required giving in to the silence.

Down the ladder: Love (pyramus and thisbe)

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.1666665
Weighted score: 5.313765
Overall Rank: 3540
Posted: January 6, 2006 11:14 PM PST; Last modified: January 6, 2006 11:14 PM PST
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[9] http://mulberryfairy @ 64.222.209.137 | 8-Jan-06/6:50 AM | Reply
I almost didn't read because of the title, but it was worth it (both your choice of title and the read).
[9] Scarlett @ 70.171.72.141 | 27-Mar-06/6:21 AM | Reply
“wedding night” and “murder” an interesting combination, makes for an interesting poem. It gets a little eerie and ends well ~ much like the combination. Nice format of the stanzas.
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