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Toasting To Our Wedding Night (Free verse) by Beyond_Dreams

Everyone has a story, Like a perfect murder without reason, just a perfect Thought for the perfect occasion. Perfectly in-love. It doesn't require anything except giving as much as you can. Even the memory of gripping the throat is eternal. Hands rocked by the cold serrated flesh dangling like a graceful beauty; awakened to another eternity. Even the silence of the cold reminds me of taking the last sip of froth. Like the Kiss of innocence; You, sipping and listening, unveiling memories of the time, that required giving in to the silence.

Scarlett 27-Mar-06/6:21 AM
“wedding night” and “murder” an interesting combination, makes for an interesting poem. It gets a little eerie and ends well ~ much like the combination. Nice format of the stanzas.




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