poemranker ::L'Étoile by Shardik

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Free verse № 124154

L'Étoile

Member since 2003 · Posted 27 Apr 2005 · 2 comments

The apartment was across the street from a park and the Louvre. The woman that owned it had a son that died of a drug overdose, in it. Sasha was his name, he was my age, and I knew his older sister. My French was shit poor, worse than a Canadians, so I'm glad that no-one paid attention when I slipped off and visited Morrison's grave. The bust looked nothing like him, and there was bird shit all over his nose and right cheek -- Candle wax of some unrecognizable color had globbed down his lips and chin in grotesque shapes. Appropriate, I thought -- Putting my cigarette out in his eye. I then turned away sharply, and headed toward the sound of traffic and the unmistakable reek of rotten fish.

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[6] ChaseValentine 27-Apr-05/2:26 PM Reply
Ooh. This could be good if there were more to it. It seems less like poetry and more like "microfiction."
[8] http://mulberryfairy 28-Apr-05/8:04 PM Reply
yes quite