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We'll be right back after these messages (Other) by INTRANSIT
Watching movies at home all day every time I press the button the television says: play.

Up the ladder: Pine Boxes (revised)
Down the ladder: pleading

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.857143
Weighted score: 5.230521
Overall Rank: 4233
Posted: January 1, 2006 7:10 PM PST; Last modified: January 1, 2006 7:10 PM PST
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[8] zodiac @ 70.109.13.79 | 2-Jan-06/8:10 AM | Reply
Cute.
[6] Dovina @ 69.175.32.104 | 2-Jan-06/12:12 PM | Reply
Depressing. Take a long walk.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.116.138 > Dovina | 4-Jan-06/2:57 PM | Reply
And you should go fly a plane. Basso, preferably.
[6] Dovina @ 209.247.222.89 > INTRANSIT | 4-Jan-06/3:02 PM | Reply
Make that Alto, and I should.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.116.138 > Dovina | 4-Jan-06/3:15 PM | Reply
Well I'll be. I hve to change my spelling of balsa. I could swear I saw it spelled -asso once. Too long ago I guess.
[5] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.139.139 | 3-Jan-06/8:24 PM | Reply
I would have liked more...
"So I played....with myself...with my guitar...with leggos...the spider in the corner of the window...something! Yeah, depressing...it says play, and I sit passive, watching. (Like 1/2 of America.) I just see that this could have went so many places.
[8] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 | 4-Jan-06/6:04 PM | Reply
Hah! Once again it seems we posted poems on simular subjects. See, God does speak to us. And by God I mean TV.
Witty stuff.
[9] http://mulberryfairy @ 64.222.209.137 | 8-Jan-06/6:18 PM | Reply
when will you obey?
[5] amanda_dcosta @ 203.145.159.37 | 9-Jan-06/10:29 AM | Reply
Hmmm, Ahem, .... I'm speechless. A bit weird I feel, or maybe its not got to me well enough.
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