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Walking Out (Free verse) by NoSage
How do you help someone
Find their way through the moonless night.
I've been there before,
Doing what I can to get another bag.
I know where the pitfalls were for me,
But that doesn't make it right.
Still, I hate to see another wasted life
Especially one as beautiful as yours.
If I held your hand, and we both walked blind
Unseeing in the depth of night,
Perhaps we would fall before we found the dawn,
But at least it's worth a try.
It's not an easy path, I'll be honest about that.
But before our trip is through
You'll know who your friend are,
Or at least which ones were true.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.179294
Overall Rank: 4830
Posted: April 28, 2005 8:32 PM PDT; Last modified: April 28, 2005 8:32 PM PDT
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