Ricochets (Double Ethere)

Member since 2003 · Posted 22 May 2004 · 1 comment

One Just one Love beneath Treating me bad Hates me forever Adolescent romance Chapstick under the collar Do not leave me before you go A simple u-turn and back again Ricochets impairing me without you Investigate yourself and you will find Hold me close for I shall not release Reflections notwithstanding time Imperfect darkness clouds me Liberate our passions Turn our backs to fate Little wonder Bated love Two souls One

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[9] Dan garcia-Black 23-May-04/5:48 PM Reply

Nice form. Well executed. Content eludes me. Maybe that's a good thing. I rarely like a poem at first 10 reads. Maybe by line 10-1 I'll get it.