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Fingers Are Soldiers (Free verse) by somemorepoetry
Fingers are soldiers
Shaking themselves dry in the trenches
After marching through the
Sogging September rain.
No-Man's Land sits back
And smiles with a
Cigar perched between his lips.
Your potholes, your wires,
Your snarling faces, death traps,
Bloody corpses and explosive shards
Have laid themselves down:
Sacrifices are willing but murder is now.
And no raven will ever land
On my heart,
No shadow will pass itself
Through the needle
Of my mind.
To be red again is the blessing;
What was murder is triumph
And blood running black
Is puncuated by landmines.
Jawless comrades
Gape at us with
Broken, edited teeth.
Fingers stiffened in the cold,
Pointing skyward and inward
And towards the deserted valleys
Where the innocents used to sleep.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.25
Weighted score: 5.2682066
Overall Rank: 3923
Posted: April 25, 2005 7:26 PM PDT; Last modified: April 27, 2005 6:51 PM PDT
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***Gape at us with
***Broken, edited teeth.
Damn good images in this. Some of them bloody as hell, but damn good.