Re: a comment on Killing Ben Afleck by Shardik |
25-Jul-03/9:05 AM |
No, I meant what I said. Ben Afleck, even if you hate him, is not worth the passion you are wasting on him here.
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Re: The Frey by Southern_Bell |
25-Jul-03/6:58 AM |
It is hard for us old folks' eyes to focus when we have to keep scrolling down because the lines are so far apart. Maybe a one line space between would do.
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Re: Poemranker's Recent Infestation of Teenage Girls by 68.75.19.117 |
25-Jul-03/6:50 AM |
Who's looking for love/sex on poemranker anyway? If they are, then they know what they are getting into, a harsh "4" for the unnecessary warning.
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Re: Feasting Ouroboros by <~> |
24-Jul-03/7:23 PM |
I think the title works well. Nice job.
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Re: Christs Harlot by Don-Quixote |
24-Jul-03/7:12 PM |
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Re: Killing Ben Afleck by Shardik |
24-Jul-03/7:08 PM |
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Re: a comment on Voluptuous, Blonde Bird-Woman by http://mulberryfairy |
24-Jul-03/9:36 AM |
Thanks. It takes a social worker to notice these vivid details and report them later in a fictionalized, ambiguous account (for billing purposes).
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Re: a comment on Voluptuous, Blonde Bird-Woman by http://mulberryfairy |
24-Jul-03/9:33 AM |
I did not....have....sexual relations....with....that woman....the Bird-Woman.
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Re: Halves by impert&ent |
22-Jul-03/7:08 PM |
beautiful. Nice juxtaposition of the coming and going at the end.
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Re: Middleman by INTRANSIT |
22-Jul-03/6:59 PM |
Reminds me of Phish at Limestone, Maine. I like the ending.
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Re: Truckin' by INTRANSIT |
22-Jul-03/6:57 PM |
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Re: the preacher and the poet by http://findingwater |
22-Jul-03/6:53 PM |
Nice. Don't forget the politician and the actor.
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Re: a comment on Coffle by Wulf |
22-Jul-03/6:17 PM |
That wouldn't be funny even if you were smart enough to spell diarrhea correctly.
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Re: I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike |
22-Jul-03/6:06 PM |
Well, I'd wondered what "Pimple" poems had in common.
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Re: a comment on Phone Support: To Lee by http://mulberryfairy |
22-Jul-03/6:01 PM |
Thanks for the feedback, I don't think many people have the attention span for a "poem" this long. What is this about "pray to penis for rent"? Didn't you read I'm a social worker?
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Re: a comment on Performer by http://mulberryfairy |
22-Jul-03/5:57 PM |
Well, this particular poem happens to be part of a set of non-fiction memoirs of poetic moments that I've witnessed w/ my daughter, so it's hard to imagine it any other way.
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Re: Walk in a dream (an ode to self help poems) by Bachus |
12-Jul-03/7:23 AM |
I like how human this feels. What do these poems in the "pimple" category have in common? Just wondering.
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Re: How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8 |
12-Jul-03/7:16 AM |
Thanks for reminding me to wear flip flops in ALL showers from now on.
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Re: To Lesley by Bahookie |
12-Jul-03/7:12 AM |
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Re: First Confirmation by babyBOOMER |
12-Jul-03/7:11 AM |
Combat fatigue. Nice that you have a place/method to release some of those painful memories, and that you seem to be able to see what happened clearly.
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