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Christs Harlot (Free verse) by Don-Quixote
broken dreamer screaming away each day a new illusion suffering the inability to find the conclusion of his thorny crowns insane visions lighter flame dancing over brown leaves the cigar crackling smoke drifting around him lights dim vodka filled to the rim the glass sparkling as he watches his harlot sing staring apon his ring wondering why the thorns grow deeper into his skull

Down the ladder: Reptilian Evolution

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5631
Posted: July 24, 2003 7:07 AM PDT; Last modified: July 24, 2003 2:41 PM PDT
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[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 24-Jul-03/11:52 AM | Reply
harlot.
[n/a] Don-Quixote @ 204.31.169.75 > <~> | 24-Jul-03/2:42 PM | Reply
thanks for spelling correction.. ;/ how did i fuckin misspell that.. no more weed for me..
[8] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.144.181 | 24-Jul-03/7:12 PM | Reply
So dark.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 66.81.152.134 > http://mulberryfairy | 24-Jul-03/7:42 PM | Reply
thanks
[9] 68.75.19.117 @ 68.75.19.117 | 24-Jul-03/10:01 PM | Reply
i'm drunk
and it made me
shiver
great job
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