Re: Fucking B by A sad syrupless Waffel by horus8	20-Jul-03/12:03 AM
call me fruit loops! your work never fails at making me laugh to the point of choking. Blessed with 10.
Re: waiting in my own way by rockinindividual	22-Jul-03/8:16 PM
it bored me. ;/ 7.
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Jul-03/6:20 AM
me too.
Re: Lake Pyramid's Secret by Bachus	24-Jul-03/6:22 AM
nice. 9.
Re: Octopussed by <{Baba^Yaga}>	28-Jul-03/4:37 PM
want some calamari with that tartar sauce? ;x 8.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Jul-03/7:08 PM
seaweed sushi wrap i hear the tap of my chopsticks my tounge licks lips turning blue im an ocean.. yeah.. ok, what was i doing? ah, yes, this piece.. nice imagery.. kinda bored me though. 7.
Re: Angel by mistaric	6-Aug-03/1:02 PM
Eh.. cliche to the max.. and very very mushy..
Re: There can be only one by Shardik	6-Aug-03/1:14 PM
highlander.. heh. 8.
Re: Oxywarmonger by poetandknowit	6-Aug-03/1:53 PM
texan urban schizophrenic gun lust.. yeah... well written, but i think it needs, i dunno, some type of comical spicing.. it was long, and when i got to the middle i started feeling sensations of boredome.. no offense, i cant write this well (atleast not yet anyway) but im just voicing my opinion.
Re: Speaking my mind. Brilliant Idea! by thepinkbunnyofdoom	7-Aug-03/2:03 AM
cmon you damned furry mammal, are you still whining about that old wound of yours? Its time to move onto some fresh wounds. 7
Re: Inet. mag. editors R jealous red haired Jews, oh and I'm 29 by horus8	7-Aug-03/6:40 AM
ahh.. man thats alot of crappy birthdays.. kinda like my christmas memories with the witch.. 10.
Re: blue lilac and I (edit) by richa	7-Aug-03/8:40 AM
a beautiful piece richa.. well done.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Aug-03/9:47 AM
this is going to be a punchline.. ;)
Re: God is a Lady by thepinkbunnyofdoom	7-Aug-03/12:28 PM
misery.. btw, the use of the enter key to perhaps shorten the length for each verse would make it neat, and easier to read, also more comprehendible (if done right) other than that, its a very good captured emotional image. not sure about the last two lines though. I think the title sucks.. need a better one. overall: 8, perhaps a nine with clean up and better title.
Re: The Final Say by Nightmare-Poet	7-Aug-03/1:13 PM
A Pimple Infested Suicide Note The Modern Day Teenage Emote Jump Off The Boat Into The Sea SWIM WILLY, SWIM WILLY BE FREE! Get That Underwater Submarine Degree Go On That Crusade God Knows You Paid Tons Of Shrimp Just To Fade Into The Deep Blue Abyss Oh Jesu How I Will Miss That Neurotic Navy Submarine Torpedo Man He Was Rocketed Into A H20 Space Adventure 2001 Leagues Under The Sea, A Loser Odyssey
Re: Myopic Labotomized Hubris by Retaliate	7-Aug-03/1:17 PM
It takes a steady hand to pull the cock against the strain so determined to have its way Who will grab the cock? Who will toke the snake so we can all get out of the car and jerk ourselves off for a fucking change?
Re: Sagadahoc to Hudson by http://mulberryfairy	9-Aug-03/10:14 PM
Man.. that has to suck, doing all that for the hope to get laid, and your stuck on that highway. lol.. did you bring a dildo? heh. nice. 10.
Re: A look at Horus8 by Sir.Psycho.Sexy	15-Aug-03/2:53 PM
lmao. its a war!! cool. -sits down and decided to watch-
Re: Icecream Soul by LuckyJoe	15-Aug-03/7:00 PM
wheres the beef? milky ice cream drippin, looks like your masterbatin.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Aug-03/5:58 AM
wow joe. i parody one of your works and already you run not too long after wards.. what a cheap shit you are. i never knew how PROFOUND your writing was.. but you still like to yap about it alot.. well, bye bye weakling. only the strong survive. heres a nice fat 0