on Oxywarmonger by poetandknowit
6 Aug 2003, 1:53 PM
texan urban schizophrenic gun lust.. yeah... well written, but i think it needs, i dunno, some type of comical spicing.. it was long, and when i got to the middle i started feeling sensations of boredome.. no offense, i cant write this well (atleast not yet anyway) but im just voicing my opinion.
on some deleted poem
24 Jul 2003, 6:20 AM
me too.
on Fucking B by A sad syrupless Waffel by horus8
20 Jul 2003, 12:03 AM
call me fruit loops! your work never fails at making me laugh to the point of choking. Blessed with 10.
on There can be only one by Shardik
6 Aug 2003, 1:14 PM
highlander.. heh. 8.
on some deleted poem
20 Aug 2003, 5:58 AM
wow joe. i parody one of your works and already you run not too long after wards.. what a cheap shit you are.
i never knew how PROFOUND your writing was.. but you still like to yap about it alot.. well, bye bye weakling. only the strong survive.
heres a nice fat 0
i never knew how PROFOUND your writing was.. but you still like to yap about it alot.. well, bye bye weakling. only the strong survive.
heres a nice fat 0
on Icecream Soul by LuckyJoe
15 Aug 2003, 7:00 PM
wheres the beef? milky ice cream drippin, looks like your masterbatin.
on A look at Horus8 by Sir.Psycho.Sexy
15 Aug 2003, 2:53 PM
lmao. its a war!! cool. -sits down and decided to watch-
on Sagadahoc to Hudson by http://mulberryfairy
9 Aug 2003, 10:14 PM
Man.. that has to suck, doing all that for the hope to get laid, and your stuck on that highway. lol.. did you bring a dildo? heh. nice. 10.
on The Final Say by Nightmare-Poet
7 Aug 2003, 1:13 PM
A Pimple Infested Suicide Note
The Modern Day Teenage Emote
Jump Off The Boat
Into The Sea
SWIM WILLY, SWIM WILLY BE FREE!
Get That Underwater Submarine Degree
Go On That Crusade
God Knows You Paid
Tons Of Shrimp Just To Fade
Into The Deep Blue Abyss
Oh Jesu How I Will Miss
That Neurotic Navy Submarine Torpedo Man
He Was Rocketed Into A H20 Space Adventure
2001 Leagues Under The Sea, A Loser Odyssey
The Modern Day Teenage Emote
Jump Off The Boat
Into The Sea
SWIM WILLY, SWIM WILLY BE FREE!
Get That Underwater Submarine Degree
Go On That Crusade
God Knows You Paid
Tons Of Shrimp Just To Fade
Into The Deep Blue Abyss
Oh Jesu How I Will Miss
That Neurotic Navy Submarine Torpedo Man
He Was Rocketed Into A H20 Space Adventure
2001 Leagues Under The Sea, A Loser Odyssey
on Myopic Labotomized Hubris by Retaliate
7 Aug 2003, 1:17 PM
It takes a steady hand to pull the cock
against the strain so determined
to have its way
Who will grab the cock?
Who will toke the snake
so we can all get out of the car and jerk ourselves off for a fucking change?
against the strain so determined
to have its way
Who will grab the cock?
Who will toke the snake
so we can all get out of the car and jerk ourselves off for a fucking change?
on some deleted poem
7 Aug 2003, 9:47 AM
this is going to be a punchline.. ;)
on God is a Lady by thepinkbunnyofdoom
7 Aug 2003, 12:28 PM
misery.. btw, the use of the enter key to perhaps shorten the length for each verse would make it neat, and easier to read, also more comprehendible (if done right)
other than that, its a very good captured emotional image. not sure about the last two lines though.
I think the title sucks.. need a better one.
overall: 8, perhaps a nine with clean up and better title.
other than that, its a very good captured emotional image. not sure about the last two lines though.
I think the title sucks.. need a better one.
overall: 8, perhaps a nine with clean up and better title.
on Speaking my mind. Brilliant Idea! by thepinkbunnyofdoom
7 Aug 2003, 2:03 AM
cmon you damned furry mammal, are you still whining about that old wound of yours?
Its time to move onto some fresh wounds. 7
Its time to move onto some fresh wounds. 7
on Inet. mag. editors R jealous red haired Jews, oh and I'm 29 by horus8
7 Aug 2003, 6:40 AM
ahh.. man thats alot of crappy birthdays.. kinda like my christmas memories with the witch.. 10.
on blue lilac and I (edit) by richa
7 Aug 2003, 8:40 AM
a beautiful piece richa.. well done.
on Octopussed by <{Baba^Yaga}>
28 Jul 2003, 4:37 PM
want some calamari with that tartar sauce? ;x 8.
on some deleted poem
28 Jul 2003, 7:08 PM
seaweed sushi wrap
i hear the tap
of my chopsticks
my tounge licks
lips turning blue
im an ocean.. yeah.. ok, what was i doing? ah, yes, this piece.. nice imagery.. kinda bored me though. 7.
i hear the tap
of my chopsticks
my tounge licks
lips turning blue
im an ocean.. yeah.. ok, what was i doing? ah, yes, this piece.. nice imagery.. kinda bored me though. 7.
on Lake Pyramid's Secret by Bachus
24 Jul 2003, 6:22 AM
nice. 9.
on waiting in my own way by rockinindividual
22 Jul 2003, 8:16 PM
it bored me. ;/ 7.