on By Now by Lie2MePinnochio
27 Aug 2003, 1:21 AM
whats this? rambling? funny. lets ask picasso.
on Nightshades by Bachus
28 Aug 2003, 3:53 AM
I liked this.. one of these days i need to attack poetic forms.. btw horus, i was wondering if you knew a good website that listed the forms and had examples of how to make them. If you know a good place tell me.
blessed with 10.
blessed with 10.
on Sex with a hairy brazilian by scitz
23 Aug 2003, 3:02 AM
"I took a bite" really? did she kick you in the face afterwards? lol.
heres a 9.
heres a 9.
on Robe Lowe, Me and Icecream by RO-B-LOWE ME PLEASE
26 Aug 2003, 7:16 PM
lmao. 10.
on some deleted poem
24 Aug 2003, 8:33 AM
interesting ending. 8. ;)
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2003, 8:48 AM
love is in the air, jesus being right in the middle of it.. check out my parody based on "praying for help" by crystal lane swift. its my best yet.
oh yeah, 7.
When I pierced your shield- huh? was she a virgin? or is this just your way of saying -i penetrated your lips-?
oh yeah, 7.
When I pierced your shield- huh? was she a virgin? or is this just your way of saying -i penetrated your lips-?
on Pray For Cum By JesusFreak (parody of CLS's pray for help) by DreamerSupreme
3 Sep 2003, 8:27 AM
I am damn fucking proud of myself. I think that this parody is the best one i have ever written.
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2003, 8:36 AM
hrmmm.. flames.. how many times has that one been used.. add more fuel to lit your fire.. cmon, be more creative than that.
4.
4.
on Picasso by DreamerSupreme
27 Aug 2003, 6:46 PM
Now, i have dishonored your beloved picasso.. now you can defend him, now you can give me a zero and have a good excuse.. NOW YOU CAN! ok?
now all can wonder about good ole picasso.
now all can wonder about good ole picasso.
on some deleted poem
28 Aug 2003, 5:33 AM
hrmm.. blessed with nine. nice work.
on Anna Kournikova (Pretense of Wesley Willis) by Lie2MePinnochio
27 Aug 2003, 1:22 AM
my recent attempt at being funny was more humorouse than this, and less retarded. it still sucked, but this makes it look good.
0. Does picasso approve?
0. Does picasso approve?
on some deleted poem
24 Aug 2003, 8:52 AM
Joe, good. kept it focused, try to get more descriptive with imagery though. :) btw, what you think of my first lyric?
Blessed with 9.
Blessed with 9.
on Trollop: A Married Mans Revenge by DreamerSupreme
23 Aug 2003, 2:56 AM
did Mr. Giggles like that? ;)
on Trollop: A Married Mans Revenge by DreamerSupreme
23 Aug 2003, 2:57 AM
I NEVER KNEW HOW FUN IT IS TO KILL TILL NOW! ITS FUCKING WONDERFULL! I FEEL LIKE A MILLION DOLLARS!
on eyeh8LIEph by psikosis
21 Aug 2003, 7:45 AM
what the fuck are you babbling about?
"disguised by fate, brought together by immortal
suffering"
ok.. cute.. that really adds a cherry to the whole thing.. and your title is shit.
heres a 3
"disguised by fate, brought together by immortal
suffering"
ok.. cute.. that really adds a cherry to the whole thing.. and your title is shit.
heres a 3
on Forget it...k? by psikosis
21 Aug 2003, 7:47 AM
Stay thee away.
nice one shakespear.. i really liked the ending, i think it was the best part of the whole poem.
heres a 2
nice one shakespear.. i really liked the ending, i think it was the best part of the whole poem.
heres a 2
on Under a better bed wetter by Shardik
20 Aug 2003, 2:37 PM
as always, you made john look like a moron.. course, you could of left it unparodied.. it speaks for itself lmao. 10.
on quarter-step (abridged) by richa
21 Aug 2003, 5:24 AM
what want ?? er.. perhaps a typo?..
over all the poems vague, it doesnt make much sense to me. I think you need to cook this slightly longer. I'll give my vote later.
over all the poems vague, it doesnt make much sense to me. I think you need to cook this slightly longer. I'll give my vote later.
on some deleted poem
20 Aug 2003, 6:36 AM
... you obviously want wings.. lets give him his wanker wings!!!!
on some deleted poem
24 Aug 2003, 12:25 PM
ah, better! heh. 9