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20-Aug-03/6:36 AM |
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... you obviously want wings.. lets give him his wanker wings!!!!
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| Re: Under a better bed wetter by Shardik |
20-Aug-03/2:37 PM |
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as always, you made john look like a moron.. course, you could of left it unparodied.. it speaks for itself lmao. 10.
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| Re: quarter-step (abridged) by richa |
21-Aug-03/5:24 AM |
what want ?? er.. perhaps a typo?..
over all the poems vague, it doesnt make much sense to me. I think you need to cook this slightly longer. I'll give my vote later.
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| Re: eyeh8LIEph by psikosis |
21-Aug-03/7:45 AM |
what the fuck are you babbling about?
"disguised by fate, brought together by immortal
suffering"
ok.. cute.. that really adds a cherry to the whole thing.. and your title is shit.
heres a 3
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| Re: Forget it...k? by psikosis |
21-Aug-03/7:47 AM |
Stay thee away.
nice one shakespear.. i really liked the ending, i think it was the best part of the whole poem.
heres a 2
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| Re: Trollop: A Married Mans Revenge by DreamerSupreme |
23-Aug-03/2:56 AM |
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did Mr. Giggles like that? ;)
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| Re: Trollop: A Married Mans Revenge by DreamerSupreme |
23-Aug-03/2:57 AM |
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I NEVER KNEW HOW FUN IT IS TO KILL TILL NOW! ITS FUCKING WONDERFULL! I FEEL LIKE A MILLION DOLLARS!
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| Re: Sex with a hairy brazilian by scitz |
23-Aug-03/3:02 AM |
"I took a bite" really? did she kick you in the face afterwards? lol.
heres a 9.
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24-Aug-03/8:33 AM |
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interesting ending. 8. ;)
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24-Aug-03/8:52 AM |
Joe, good. kept it focused, try to get more descriptive with imagery though. :) btw, what you think of my first lyric?
Blessed with 9.
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24-Aug-03/12:25 PM |
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| Re: Robe Lowe, Me and Icecream by RO-B-LOWE ME PLEASE |
26-Aug-03/7:16 PM |
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| Re: By Now by Lie2MePinnochio |
27-Aug-03/1:21 AM |
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whats this? rambling? funny. lets ask picasso.
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| Re: Anna Kournikova (Pretense of Wesley Willis) by Lie2MePinnochio |
27-Aug-03/1:22 AM |
my recent attempt at being funny was more humorouse than this, and less retarded. it still sucked, but this makes it look good.
0. Does picasso approve?
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| Re: Picasso by DreamerSupreme |
27-Aug-03/6:46 PM |
Now, i have dishonored your beloved picasso.. now you can defend him, now you can give me a zero and have a good excuse.. NOW YOU CAN! ok?
now all can wonder about good ole picasso.
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| Re: Nightshades by Bachus |
28-Aug-03/3:53 AM |
I liked this.. one of these days i need to attack poetic forms.. btw horus, i was wondering if you knew a good website that listed the forms and had examples of how to make them. If you know a good place tell me.
blessed with 10.
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28-Aug-03/5:33 AM |
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hrmm.. blessed with nine. nice work.
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| Re: Pray For Cum By JesusFreak (parody of CLS's pray for help) by DreamerSupreme |
3-Sep-03/8:27 AM |
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I am damn fucking proud of myself. I think that this parody is the best one i have ever written.
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3-Sep-03/8:36 AM |
hrmmm.. flames.. how many times has that one been used.. add more fuel to lit your fire.. cmon, be more creative than that.
4.
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3-Sep-03/8:48 AM |
love is in the air, jesus being right in the middle of it.. check out my parody based on "praying for help" by crystal lane swift. its my best yet.
oh yeah, 7.
When I pierced your shield- huh? was she a virgin? or is this just your way of saying -i penetrated your lips-?
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