Re: I'm going back to art school by TanHand	3-Sep-03/9:03 AM
Okay bored now, fuck this -dreamers creative response: -Settle's Snake Song- stroking penis isnt fun no more, im feeling oh so sore, cockhead foreskin rubbin has become a bore, i need to go buy a motherfucking whore, i want more, than just my hand, i want more than just my tanhand strapped to my penis like a rubberband. --- heh. have fun at art school you bastage. heres an 8.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Sep-03/9:57 AM
"if you would take the time to undertand this poem instead of ridicule it." "I think it is as original a thought as a man can have." Frank Herbert and a ton of other people wrote about consciousness with ideas similiar, or just like this, better, more effectively, and with a better understanding of the subject. Your the arrogant one my friend, you think your having a brilliant spark of genius, and you are NOT. your also avoiding explaining your claims. why abe? whats there that im too lazy to understand? whats the secret lesson or meaning in all this? CMON ABE. ive written a million poems about the mind, metaphysics, philosophy, social behavior, etc, studied these things, went into the occult, alot of study and self experimentation with drugs to test the boundries of consciousness itself.. IM NOT TALKING OUT MY ASS. im not some little turd who fails to see your genius, pull your head out your anus and stomp on me if im wrong.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Sep-03/11:53 AM
you really dont like fat people.. did one accidentally sit on you or something? lol.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Sep-03/11:58 AM
?.. -shrug-
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Sep-03/12:17 AM
urm.. i like the other one where i was confused, and needed explaination..
Re: Upside down and tigers by horus8	16-Sep-03/8:43 PM
like the last line.. 8.
Re: Those Motherfuckers Have Moved Out And So Have I by JoyLuck	18-Sep-03/10:41 AM
amusing, cute, amazingly beautiful (somehow you pull it off) heres an 8.
Re: Scorpion feet lucky rabbit by horus8	18-Sep-03/10:47 AM
And a fat see through scorpion Poisonous, & barbed kisses full of babies. -i had a crystal clear vision of the scorpion, and i like it.. i wish i could paint it and hang it on my wall, but im a poet because i couldnt draw worth a fuck. btw, whats a ruana? blessed with nine.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Sep-03/10:58 AM
course should be coarse? other than that: HAIL CAESAR!! loved it. 10.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Sep-03/11:02 AM
and hate is the most feverish sort of love at times. 8.
Re: Up for a game? by LuckyJoe	18-Sep-03/12:11 PM
an improvement, you have been struggling for awhile, but this is proof that there is hope. 7.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Sep-03/12:14 PM
see, thats why i frowned instead of sniveling all over your tribute poem. bastard. heh, heres a nine.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Sep-03/12:17 PM
ok, i like the general idea.. but JOE!!!!! ... your outlining, i want some meat.. take me there, I WANT TO FEEL IT, HEAR IT, TASTE IT, SMELL IT, ETC ETC. aside from my pushing, heres an 8.
Re: At First sight by Nirvana13666	18-Sep-03/12:24 PM
blah blah blah -- your ordinary off the wall bathroom stall scrawl.. *fart* 0
Re: Mother by Freethinker1602	18-Sep-03/12:31 PM
oh jesus christ. GROW SOME BALLS. i expressed my hatred to my mother straight to her fucking face. you actually wrote and posted this here for HER? couldnt you use a little piece of paper for that so you could hang it on the fridge? fucking imbecile.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Sep-03/3:13 PM
shit. poo. its wonderful, your the dung master. 8
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Sep-03/3:16 PM
lmao. the poem designed for married men. love it. FLUSH HER!!! LIKE POO! and trade the groceries and dresses in to get some beer. blessed with 10.
Re: Addiction causing stupidity by LuckyJoe	18-Sep-03/3:58 PM
well.. your writing convinces me that you are not in possesion of the ability to handle intoxicants.. my ole poem: stupid after drugs, means you were a good actor before meeting your wife, who is more charming than you are :) lucky.. why do you feel that adding all this extra wrapping paper will make the stupid message look pretty? it looks stupid, makes little sense, and everyone with eyes can see that your layin the bullshit HEAVY.. it stinks.. shovel it. 3
Re: Being Called Dave by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	18-Sep-03/4:05 PM
bad joke.. DAVE... DAVID DULL, .. DAVE.. SAVE DAVE FROM HIS MUNDANE UNIVERSE - STAB ME DAVE, GET SOME ADRENALIN (its good for your blood, when i drink it, and rid the world of another boring cunt)
Re: Lucky Joe Finds a Ring by DreamerSupreme	18-Sep-03/4:13 PM
short, simple, amusing, and skips all the wonderfull birthday wrapping paper and extra tasteless icing.. more effective no? AYE? lucky joe, sometimes less is more..