on some deleted poem
4 Oct 2003, 4:25 AM
its like having a remote, i can always count on electric results.
on Unemployment Lining by Jeremi B. Handrinos
18 Sep 2003, 7:09 PM
you scare me.. ;/ 8.
on memories by ThePariahDog
20 Sep 2003, 11:17 PM
the rejected? hrmm. nice name.
on some deleted poem
20 Sep 2003, 8:57 PM
jealousy so intense,
that it can go beyond self hate
and drive you to end
your own life
making sure not even yourself
can outdo you and get away with it.
you know yourself well, you think, but:
denial so deep can kill
and leave you living to enjoy
a mental universe more unpleasant
than any emmy-award act
you can perform crooked grin
pearly whites of mock humility
and seduction.
your furry and cute,
and you know that i know
anyone with atleast half
an eye will agree
its obviouse, bright bonfire signal
a stench foul yet
addictive and amusing.
like you, i once thought myself so clever
unlike me, back then i knew better
and came to understand, with blood dripping
and scars a plenty to rember it by
[oh, and here is a 7]
that it can go beyond self hate
and drive you to end
your own life
making sure not even yourself
can outdo you and get away with it.
you know yourself well, you think, but:
denial so deep can kill
and leave you living to enjoy
a mental universe more unpleasant
than any emmy-award act
you can perform crooked grin
pearly whites of mock humility
and seduction.
your furry and cute,
and you know that i know
anyone with atleast half
an eye will agree
its obviouse, bright bonfire signal
a stench foul yet
addictive and amusing.
like you, i once thought myself so clever
unlike me, back then i knew better
and came to understand, with blood dripping
and scars a plenty to rember it by
[oh, and here is a 7]
on Simple Can (Relic) by Liver by Shardik
20 Sep 2003, 9:23 PM
and whats worse is his self pity
whining like some toddler
that i wish to beat silly
child protection laws and the knights
of respected dead farts be damned
i fucking wish the bastards bullshit
was self-respectfuly sealed and canned.
-----
Blessed with 10, as usual horus- your eyesight is sharp and misses little or nothing.
whining like some toddler
that i wish to beat silly
child protection laws and the knights
of respected dead farts be damned
i fucking wish the bastards bullshit
was self-respectfuly sealed and canned.
-----
Blessed with 10, as usual horus- your eyesight is sharp and misses little or nothing.
on Roman Toes Power the Local Crushery by DreamerSupreme
4 Oct 2003, 3:43 AM
I am the prophet that the rummies
worship with open jaws
begging for me to bleed
which occurs only when i decide
to shed three tears in rememberance
of the silly trinity
that belongs to christianity
i do enjoy teasing..hah.
worship with open jaws
begging for me to bleed
which occurs only when i decide
to shed three tears in rememberance
of the silly trinity
that belongs to christianity
i do enjoy teasing..hah.
on some deleted poem
4 Oct 2003, 3:58 AM
Is this a self help poem.. or one of those
"today i stare into the mirror"
--and unfortunately i succeed--
shit happens. everyone must expell waste then and again.
"today i stare into the mirror"
--and unfortunately i succeed--
shit happens. everyone must expell waste then and again.
on some deleted poem
4 Oct 2003, 4:19 AM
purity is what ever you deem it to be
and purpose is a changing river
the water never stays the same
ah, about purity again:
fish have to piss and shit too
and one of my duties of being
a certified asshole, is to squat
and release poo into the flowing
h20 coming out your tap
cheers.
and purpose is a changing river
the water never stays the same
ah, about purity again:
fish have to piss and shit too
and one of my duties of being
a certified asshole, is to squat
and release poo into the flowing
h20 coming out your tap
cheers.
on ocd by FreeFormFixation
4 Oct 2003, 4:20 AM
acne is a passing horror
dead flies are an interesting cure you have imagined up though
is it working yet?
dead flies are an interesting cure you have imagined up though
is it working yet?
on some deleted poem
4 Oct 2003, 4:53 AM
your cold, and i have a blanket
ready to admit to shivering?
ready to admit to shivering?
on It Tastes So Much Sweeter When It Hurts by William Delacroix
5 Oct 2003, 7:10 AM
cherry popper
drink deep the pink wine
of them shiverin cream thighs.
drink deep the pink wine
of them shiverin cream thighs.
on Dress rehearsal by INTRANSIT
6 Oct 2003, 1:07 PM
perhaps they thought those seeds would grow.
9.
9.
on some deleted poem
23 Nov 2003, 9:18 AM
first line, ending it at winds threw me off.
perhaps:
"Near-winter and winds grasp"
would flow smoother- better start the poem? or im just crazy, heh.
heres an 8.
perhaps:
"Near-winter and winds grasp"
would flow smoother- better start the poem? or im just crazy, heh.
heres an 8.
on some deleted poem
23 Nov 2003, 9:19 AM
refresh my memory.. how many times have you mutated this piece? just wondering.
on From Womb To Wood by Caducus
26 Nov 2003, 1:02 PM
Very moving stuff. 9.
on Achilles, Mothers, and the Gods of war by Shardik
26 Nov 2003, 1:07 PM
I feel so inadequate now to speak of Mr. Haiku.
He wants me to say that he smiles on you
and your little haiku children.
Blessed with 10.
He wants me to say that he smiles on you
and your little haiku children.
Blessed with 10.
on My Love Letter by ShaNoN+960317485
26 Nov 2003, 2:04 PM
so wear this zero with pride.
on Holding on for Jesus by Everyone
26 Nov 2003, 5:22 PM
Me? Bumping into a Voodoo Priest changed everything.
on An Ode to Gobbling by horus8
28 Nov 2003, 10:48 PM
Well, reminds me of my mother.. drunk and attempting to knife my father.
Blessed with eight.
Blessed with eight.