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20 most recent comments by DreamerSupreme (21-40)

Re: Unemployment Lining by Jeremi B. Handrinos 18-Sep-03/7:09 PM
you scare me.. ;/ 8.
regarding some deleted poem... 20-Sep-03/8:57 PM
jealousy so intense,
that it can go beyond self hate
and drive you to end
your own life
making sure not even yourself
can outdo you and get away with it.

you know yourself well, you think, but:

denial so deep can kill
and leave you living to enjoy
a mental universe more unpleasant
than any emmy-award act
you can perform crooked grin
pearly whites of mock humility
and seduction.

your furry and cute,
and you know that i know

anyone with atleast half
an eye will agree

its obviouse, bright bonfire signal
a stench foul yet
addictive and amusing.

like you, i once thought myself so clever
unlike me, back then i knew better
and came to understand, with blood dripping
and scars a plenty to rember it by

[oh, and here is a 7]
Re: Simple Can (Relic) by Liver by Shardik 20-Sep-03/9:23 PM
and whats worse is his self pity
whining like some toddler
that i wish to beat silly

child protection laws and the knights
of respected dead farts be damned
i fucking wish the bastards bullshit
was self-respectfuly sealed and canned.
-----

Blessed with 10, as usual horus- your eyesight is sharp and misses little or nothing.

Re: memories by ThePariahDog 20-Sep-03/11:17 PM
the rejected? hrmm. nice name.
Re: Roman Toes Power the Local Crushery by DreamerSupreme 4-Oct-03/3:43 AM
I am the prophet that the rummies
worship with open jaws
begging for me to bleed
which occurs only when i decide
to shed three tears in rememberance
of the silly trinity
that belongs to christianity

i do enjoy teasing..hah.
regarding some deleted poem... 4-Oct-03/3:58 AM
Is this a self help poem.. or one of those

"today i stare into the mirror"

--and unfortunately i succeed--

shit happens. everyone must expell waste then and again.
regarding some deleted poem... 4-Oct-03/4:19 AM
purity is what ever you deem it to be
and purpose is a changing river
the water never stays the same

ah, about purity again:

fish have to piss and shit too
and one of my duties of being
a certified asshole, is to squat
and release poo into the flowing
h20 coming out your tap

cheers.
Re: ocd by FreeFormFixation 4-Oct-03/4:20 AM
acne is a passing horror

dead flies are an interesting cure you have imagined up though

is it working yet?
regarding some deleted poem... 4-Oct-03/4:25 AM
its like having a remote, i can always count on electric results.
regarding some deleted poem... 4-Oct-03/4:53 AM
your cold, and i have a blanket

ready to admit to shivering?
Re: It Tastes So Much Sweeter When It Hurts by William Delacroix 5-Oct-03/7:10 AM
cherry popper
drink deep the pink wine
of them shiverin cream thighs.
Re: Dress rehearsal by INTRANSIT 6-Oct-03/1:07 PM
perhaps they thought those seeds would grow.

9.
Re: Sweetart by Bachus 23-Nov-03/8:21 AM
Like a car: built to breakdown.
Blessed with eight.
regarding some deleted poem... 23-Nov-03/9:18 AM
first line, ending it at winds threw me off.

perhaps:

"Near-winter and winds grasp"

would flow smoother- better start the poem? or im just crazy, heh.

heres an 8.
regarding some deleted poem... 23-Nov-03/9:19 AM
refresh my memory.. how many times have you mutated this piece? just wondering.
Re: From Womb To Wood by Caducus 26-Nov-03/1:02 PM
Very moving stuff. 9.
Re: Achilles, Mothers, and the Gods of war by Shardik 26-Nov-03/1:07 PM
I feel so inadequate now to speak of Mr. Haiku.
He wants me to say that he smiles on you
and your little haiku children.

Blessed with 10.
Re: My Love Letter by ShaNoN+960317485 26-Nov-03/2:04 PM
so wear this zero with pride.
Re: Holding on for Jesus by Everyone 26-Nov-03/5:22 PM
Me? Bumping into a Voodoo Priest changed everything.
Re: An Ode to Gobbling by horus8 28-Nov-03/10:48 PM
Well, reminds me of my mother.. drunk and attempting to knife my father.

Blessed with eight.


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