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20 most recent comments by nentwined (161-180) and replies

Re: A rock by nisim2 26-Jun-08/8:26 PM
The English of this piece is very awkward. Reads like a school assignment? Not sure you meant dolor or color (though both work about as well?) They end-rhymes (and near rhymes) feel very forced (and AABB tends to jump out as juvenile when reading something).
Re: If I Could by little_angel_maria 24-Jun-08/12:09 PM
This is by Sandra Lewis Pringle.
Re: boy girl by little_angel_maria 24-Jun-08/12:08 PM
This anonymously authored poem appears to be older than this poster.
Re: love 2 by little_angel_maria 24-Jun-08/12:03 PM
Adding one word to a poem is not a significant change. This is "Realizing Love" by Richard Sheak.
Re: a comment on a limerick from kent by nentwined 13-Mar-07/12:26 PM
I honestly don't have a clue what I was doing here. I barely have a glimmer of memory of writing it. I'm sure there was a gimmick?
Re: The exile returns by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 22-Feb-07/11:10 AM
Welcome back. :)
Re: the one by crystal4 20-Feb-07/12:25 PM
nope
Re: Harvester of Sorrow by frdup717 19-Feb-07/4:16 PM
Maybe a nice quick lyric.
Re: Lying in the Snow, Crazy? Yes. by D. $ Fontera 19-Feb-07/4:15 PM
hmm.
Re: I'M STILL IN LOVE WITH YOU by massangel62 19-Feb-07/4:14 PM
die die die
Re: Alone by frdup717 19-Feb-07/4:05 PM
quick rhymes. trite poem.
Re: Cold Feet by gregsamsa222 19-Feb-07/4:04 PM
I really like this.
Re: The Plague of Being by D. $ Fontera 19-Feb-07/4:03 PM
eh
Re: Night High by LintyWeenis 19-Feb-07/4:02 PM
very interesting. nice flow, too.
Re: Coward has a tail by LintyWeenis 19-Feb-07/4:01 PM
cute. :)
Re: The Reason by frdup717 19-Feb-07/3:55 PM
ow.
Re: A Dance by D. $ Fontera 19-Feb-07/3:55 PM
cute; I can't quite make sense of it but I like what's there.
Re: An Arrow and a Knife by blues 19-Feb-07/3:54 PM
interesting.
Re: IT All Starts With My Fears by tisa7 19-Feb-07/3:53 PM
A list of your fears might be more interesting.
Re: A Mothers Heart by TAMARAG67 19-Feb-07/3:52 PM
ack


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