Re: Hamptons by bondjedi	19-Apr-04/10:30 PM
It took me a very, very long time to get this. Though wasn't the deal she _accepted_ financial advice that she shouldn't have? As opposed to giving it?
Re: THE BLESSING by Poetsettle	19-Apr-04/10:31 PM
it is not my heart speaks? or is it You speaks? I'm confused, but it seems either way it must be wrong. very confusing all around.
Re: #12 by mikejedw	19-Apr-04/10:33 PM
over-lit, I think. doesn't do enough for me, though it does seem to be a start, the more I ponder on it. I think undulating may be less descriptive of the jersey city night than befits its number of syllables. But I really don't have any suggestions--just my reaction.
Re: Middleman by INTRANSIT	19-Apr-04/10:34 PM
Interesting, but I don't really get it. :/ potential, disaster, in triplicate? middleman? ...?
Re: Tomorrow by jude	19-Apr-04/10:35 PM
the almost-rhymes and off-rhythms are very painful to me.
Re: an exit into limbo by libby_28	19-Apr-04/10:36 PM
This is just really bad.
Re: How it should have happened by INTRANSIT	19-Apr-04/10:39 PM
interesting. I don't think you've caught me with your flow, but I don't have any suggestions.
Re: Thaw by <~>	21-Apr-04/2:20 PM
velevt. must needs add spellcheckerthingamyisthing. :/ I like "bonsai'd mountains" but don't see how it really fits. I want that in a poem all its own. I like the image and feeling overall, though. Oddly, tumefying did not mean at all what I was guessing it would.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Apr-04/8:35 AM
very cute :) yes, succumb and come feels off.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Apr-04/8:49 AM
_very_ sweet.
Re: Oh boo by Modulo	22-Apr-04/11:32 AM
cute.
Re: Tribute To Edgar Allen Poe by Fear of Garbage	22-Apr-04/12:38 PM
I don't get it. Besides that, "aloud -> allowed".
Re: The Price You Pay by Fear of Garbage	22-Apr-04/12:40 PM
interesting.
Re: Seven Sins for Seven Men (Part 1) by wilco	22-Apr-04/2:07 PM
nice, but where are the six other sins?
Re: The How To on Haikus by <Wankster>	23-Apr-04/3:08 PM
"you've mastered the haiku poem" -- 8. I can't tell if that's satire or a mistake. 6.
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Apr-04/3:10 PM
beautiful :)
Re: There Is No Such Thing As A Poem by Aetius	30-Apr-04/11:53 AM
I really like half of the lines, here. And the idea behind it. Actually, the more I read it, the more I like the idea behind it. moving a six to a seven. favorite bits: monsters, ecstatic catharsis, and the syllabic trellises. :)
regarding some deleted poem...	3-May-04/10:33 PM
I don't quite like plasmic. But. Very well done. Especially the wrap-up.
Re: Sonnet on an Operating Table by Sasha	8-May-04/12:02 PM
very cute. and points for being the first poster of the form.
Re: Truckers should not be poets by INTRANSIT	16-May-04/2:33 PM
The rhythm does seem a bit off, but villanelles are like that even when they're spot on, I think. You use some very simple rhymes, perhaps ironically, but that doesn't make them hurt less. I like the two lines you've used to repeat, and I really like that you alternate the leading. Negative points (in my book) for anything that asks for the context of poemranker. But. Dunno. For the form, and for what you're saying, I think you've done a decent job. Bonus for giving me fat to chew. This'll sit in my favorites for a bit regardless.