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Free verse № 50180

THE BLESSING

Member since 2003 · Posted 24 May 2003 · 3 comments

There is a steadily quickening beat in the dark, red cavern; it is not my heart, but You, speaks. It is You, slipped in there while I was unaware, and now, stomping round and round, it is You sorts my needs from my wants, rearranging my Life with love for the common good, when I would rest, lay the Gift down on a human breast -- every few centuries or so.

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3 comments

[5] daniella 27-Jul-03/9:41 PM Reply
its good, keep the faith
[10] Jeremi B. Handrinos 27-Jul-03/10:12 PM Reply
Lol!
[4] nentwined 19-Apr-04/10:31 PM Reply
it is not my heart speaks? or is it You speaks? I'm confused, but it seems either way it must be wrong. very confusing all around.