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THE BLESSING (Free verse) by Poetsettle
There is a steadily quickening beat in the dark, red cavern; it is not my heart, but You, speaks. It is You, slipped in there while I was unaware, and now, stomping round and round, it is You sorts my needs from my wants, rearranging my Life with love for the common good, when I would rest, lay the Gift down on a human breast -- every few centuries or so.

Up the ladder: She'll never know
Down the ladder: Dimestore Angel

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7662
Posted: May 24, 2003 6:26 PM PDT; Last modified: May 24, 2003 6:26 PM PDT
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[5] daniella @ 200.68.205.62 | 27-Jul-03/9:41 PM | Reply
its good, keep the faith
[10] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 27-Jul-03/10:12 PM | Reply
Lol!
[4] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 19-Apr-04/10:31 PM | Reply
it is not my heart speaks? or is it You speaks? I'm confused, but it seems either way it must be wrong. very confusing all around.
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