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Thaw (Free verse) by <~>
Walking past the ice-logged dam
I catch that heady smell coming off the ledge:
wet earth swollen with velevt flesh,
a welling promise amidst all this mess, this melt.
I lift my eyes to rounding mounds of exploding growth
tumefying like bonsai'd mountains, forested dense.
Green and sweet, it speaks to me of softness, so
I press against its pile, flatten gently,
test for spring.
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Weighted score: 6.030942
Overall Rank: 1239
Posted: April 21, 2004 1:10 PM PDT; Last modified: April 21, 2004 1:10 PM PDT
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