Re: Mermaid by lastobelus	12-Jan-04/12:53 PM
A bit long.. alot of editing could be done (mostly minor tweaks allover) that could really improve this poem. Blessed with eight.
Re: a comment on American Eden v.2 [revised] by SupremeDreamer	12-Jan-04/12:40 PM
The dictionary rocks. (and promises to provide hours of fun!)
Re: a comment on Da Ghetto by <{Baba^Yaga}>	12-Jan-04/12:37 PM
I've seen plenty of white ghetto shitheads during my time on earth... isn't it anti-PC to believe that only black folk inhabit "da ghetto yo?"?. The phrase "white trash" doesn't exist for nothing "ye hear me dawg?".
Re: American Eden v.2 [revised] by SupremeDreamer	12-Jan-04/12:23 PM
Finally got around to giving this ole piece the face lift it desperately needed.
Re: a comment on Cherry Blossoms (anti-haiku) by middenHeap	12-Jan-04/12:19 PM
You could of just said "Marilyn Manson is just another 'freak' with pale makeup that plays industrial metal intended to fuel teenage angst 'n frustration." And a confused pop star that can sell his odd 'n eccentric "paintings" to many "misguided" fans... "just cuz he made them without numbers" (despite being advised to use them by his agent & Trent Reznor)
Re: Prepropositioned pudding by Jeremi B. Handrinos	12-Jan-04/11:54 AM
Nice hunting traps. 8.
Re: a comment on Prepropositioned pudding by Jeremi B. Handrinos	12-Jan-04/11:52 AM
Is that your way of saying "I can't understand what you write so instead of admitting to ignorance, I'll declare your work poorly written & unintelligible."? I think so. (comment directed at little_big_nose)
Re: Lynched by Bachus	12-Jan-04/11:45 AM
LMAO. Indeed. Blessed with ten.
Re: a comment on Fake Happiness by WithoutLife	10-Jan-04/4:28 PM
Fucking pussy. Look, its a fact: If you don't care about your grammar/spelling (and decide not to improve in those areas) YOU WILL NEVER WRITE ANYTHING WORTH A FUCK!?! Oki doki motherfucker? Oh, and its "behaviour" & "apologize". Oh and if I've offended you with my asshole routine? GOOD BITCH. And I won't apologize. Ever.
Re: a comment on Fake Happiness by WithoutLife	10-Jan-04/4:23 PM
Most people are morons. See your hurts? How long did spend in english class to come up with that sentence?
Re: a comment on Dance in my Golden Shower by SupremeDreamer	10-Jan-04/4:20 PM
In the past sailors would clean wounds by pissing on them.
Re: a comment on Waiting to inhale (Stardust & God's Black Nostril) by Don-Quixote	8-Jan-04/6:19 AM
lol. Its ok, I know. Thats why it doesn't matter. :)
Re: a comment on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme	8-Jan-04/5:09 AM
YOU DID? I DIDN'T. BUT I FEED LIL STARVING COMMUNIST CHILDREN AND AM ALSO ENGAGED IN THE ASIAN DOG WAR. But I still think its fucking great to be on hallucinogens, which has nothing to do with "new age hippie-ism". And I'm very sorry that you have brain damage because of your PCP habit. Did the evil deviloak monstrosity beckon his slave to clean up your own bloody remains?? Thats horrible. But I don't feed crazy war vetrans, sorry yet again. And yes, you are special. In a galaxie far far away.
Re: a comment on Wicked Corruption by devilishnutcase	8-Jan-04/4:59 AM
Excuse me, I can't help wonder in my unfortunate curiosity but honestly? What the fuck did you say, if anything? Because I think you just nuked the target senseless somehow.
Re: a comment on Wicked Corruption by devilishnutcase	8-Jan-04/1:23 AM
Are you rankervilles long lost inner child? Beware: answering this question might affect your health, with side effects such as diarrhoea, migraines, spontaneous loss of bladder control & brain tumors.
Re: a comment on Sonnet Eighteen by devilishnutcase	7-Jan-04/1:02 AM
It isn't my crack. Time displacement isn't one of its side effects..yardbird hasn't posted since.. hell, I don't even remember.. this fuckers late, probably just woke from his coma.
Re: a comment on Dance in my Golden Shower by SupremeDreamer	7-Jan-04/12:42 AM
Ofcourse, but it will cost you 50$. ;] Long time no see bastage.
Re: a comment on Faith by Pervy Elf	6-Jan-04/2:52 PM
All of a sudden your a victim of child abuse? Bullshit. Perhaps your mental gears are batty 'n disfunctional, or my reasoning is shitty, BUT: If you are a victim of child molestation, how are you completely unable to sympathize with Pervy Elf's poem? God believing or not, as a victim you should be able to relate to his anger and disbelief. Instead you berate Pervy Elf for his lack of faith, saying that what happened to him happened because mans weak faith allows evil to do its dirty work? Was it your weak faith that lead to your molestation fair12? Was it your punishment for not having the correct amount of strength in your faith? You also say that god was there "not allowing evil to take the final step", when Pervy's angst exists because "god" DIDN'T prevent evil from taking the final step... Your reaction to this poem made no sense what-so-ever. Did god prevent your molestation? Or did he leave you to be molested when you were just a child? Let me answer that for you: GOD WASN'T DOING ANYTHING- And he wasn't doing anything because the theistic concept of an all-powerful "being" is bullshit; a product of mans need to make himself secure by putting faith in a psychological "divine father-figure and protector". In my opinion christians convolute their religion to turn it into nothing more than a fancy "teddy bear". (Which ofcourse is one reason they have no insightful knowledge or understanding of the bible, the other reason is that they give no thought as to the interpretation of the text or its meaning, but accept their undoubted literal interpretation/meaning.) And about DA being offensive? He isn't. He's being blunt and to the point, and that offends you- it also makes you angry since he makes you look stupid. YOUR FIRST RESPONSE TO PERVY'S POEM HOWEVER? Was offensive, mean-spirited, and absurd; a hurtful way for you to get revenge for pervy criticising/belittling god while voicing his disbelief. Over-all? Your full of shit: A fucking moron. And in my opinion, a shameless liar.
Re: Drinking and driving by SILYLILGURL	6-Jan-04/1:04 PM
It almost an exact commercial-script of a goverment sponsored television community message. I've heard/seen the same exact shit on radio & cable television.. You can't get more unorginal than this girlie. Heres a two..
Re: Drag me Down, Deadweight by phbiscuit	6-Jan-04/12:52 PM
Not bad at all.. Heres a well deserved nine.