Been there, stupidity is pervasive when alcohol is involved. Be more specific, discribe the scene, Mangled metal and broken glass, A pool of blood,
A life gone in a flash.
Screaming sirens pierce the air,
Broken dreams scattered here and there.
I'm not a poet, but something like that.

It almost an exact commercial-script of a goverment sponsored television community message.

I've heard/seen the same exact shit on radio & cable television..

You can't get more unorginal than this girlie.

Heres a two..

The onomotopeaia of the first line doesn't really work for me. Beyond that, this reads as the outline of a poem that covers tired ground, but could say it in an interesting manner.