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Driven (Sonnet) by sgrala
To the very ends of the Earth Down to the deepest depths of the sea Driven to be in the coldest plains in the turf By the brightest star in which can be From to battling foes upon a field Both very alike in which we see way Two scenes which we can not wield Both wait for the very day In which to strike another attack People of both sides suffer greatly While neither side can turn their backs While they both wait patiently For this dangerous adventure to end So they can start to help each other mend.

Up the ladder: Missing a Line
Down the ladder: Awakening

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10581
Posted: November 10, 2004 5:24 AM PST; Last modified: November 10, 2004 5:24 AM PST
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[n/a] horus8 @ 198.81.26.16 | 10-Nov-04/4:01 PM | Reply
This is no sonnet, but instead;
A well pinched loaf of bread.
[6] deleted user @ 172.191.225.77 | 11-Nov-04/6:53 AM | Reply
Respect for trying.
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