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Missing a Line (Free verse) by peaceseeker i am like an autumn tree
changing colors to lose
buried roots growing down
harboring lives within
i am like the stars at night
held in constellations of light
astrological computations
i am like a garden pushing up
miraculous perennials and
delicate annuals amid a border
of raw quartz from the sea
Up the ladder:
Driven
Down the ladder:
hypnotic spell
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Posted: October 2, 2004 11:24 AM PDT; Last modified: October 2, 2004 11:24 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.8509965 Overall Rank: 10566 Comments:
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http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.145.16
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11-Oct-04/6:42 AM
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I think it'd be a more effective metaphor than similie. I could visualize it though.
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