Missing a Line

Member since 2003 · Posted 2 Oct 2004 · 1 comment

i am like an autumn tree changing colors to lose buried roots growing down harboring lives within i am like the stars at night held in constellations of light astrological computations i am like a garden pushing up miraculous perennials and delicate annuals amid a border of raw quartz from the sea

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[8] http://mulberryfairy 11-Oct-04/6:42 AM Reply

I think it'd be a more effective metaphor than similie. I could visualize it though.