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Drinking and driving (Free verse) by SILYLILGURL

EEEEEERRRRRRRKKKKKK CRASH! The sound of the car crashing into a brick wall That's the last minute of their lives That's how fast our life goes by. All the people died except The driver who was left to feel guilty from drinking and driving Always thinking How fast our lives go!

sliver 31-Dec-03/7:54 AM
Been there, stupidity is pervasive when alcohol is involved. Be more specific, discribe the scene, Mangled metal and broken glass, A pool of blood,
A life gone in a flash.
Screaming sirens pierce the air,
Broken dreams scattered here and there.
I'm not a poet, but something like that.




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