Re: Gethsemane (or, Jesus learns what's up with dying) by zodiac	1-Feb-04/2:07 PM
brilliant, fucking brilliant. 10.
Re: Scarlet Wyvern by SupremeDreamer	20-Jan-04/2:47 PM
I have found the name of names! Baptized in blood, may this poem be known as Scarlet Wyvern!!!
Re: a comment on Skull Soup v.2 by SupremeDreamer	20-Jan-04/12:29 AM
well it was mainly theory at first.. with an amusing ending. But then I crossbred a cook with a poet and cooking metaphors for the theory. Honestly though, I wrote this up just to write something really.. anything. It atleast managed to evolve into a fancy punchline. Oh, and who do you think I should direct my thoughts to? other than my innumerouse personalities, the bastards next door, or other characters involved in my comic existence? I'm accepting all suggestions at this time.
Re: a comment on Skull Soup v.2 by SupremeDreamer	15-Jan-04/6:46 AM
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Re: a comment on Skull Soup v.2 by SupremeDreamer	15-Jan-04/6:44 AM
yeah, id like to see that. The thing that makes it a bit hard is that i started all theoretical 'n introspective and added the ending when i realized the piece turned out.. well fucking rigid and somewhat dull. extending the metaphor into the theory bits used will certainly be messy, but fuck it, its been too long since my last signature food metaphor piece..
Re: a comment on Skull Soup v.2 by SupremeDreamer	15-Jan-04/6:34 AM
well, I dont see what else I can add to that quote.. and "shit" kills most of the humor intended no?
Re: a comment on Skull Soup v.2 by SupremeDreamer	15-Jan-04/6:24 AM
expletive? muttering more.. well, lets see where I can add some more of that 'n extra cookin after I lighten some of the theory some first.
Re: a comment on Skull Soup v.2 by SupremeDreamer	15-Jan-04/6:07 AM
Well, no that hasn't been said before, (well, asfar as i know anyway) its in quotes since thats what im muttering outloud to myself. (Unneeded?)
Re: Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8	13-Jan-04/11:36 AM
Where do you meet these shit-heads man? Honestly, hook me up, I need this kind of entertainment in excess, consistently. Can we market Billy Jesus as americas new at-home tap & constant IV drip? I predict it'll make a killing with jewish housewives. And amphetamine freaks with pens. Blessed with ten.
Re: a comment on The Blues by fevriere	13-Jan-04/9:40 AM
I can't argue there. You have won this battle.. for now.
Re: a comment on Victory smokes & black tiger ambrosia by Don-Quixote	13-Jan-04/9:36 AM
1: your right, its sour. But honestly, bitter, sour, don't they both convey to anyone without brainwave activity that "IT TASTES BAD??" 2: *fart* 3: *fart* 4: Well, it doesn't interest you ofcourse, and incoherence is always the case when I haven't bothered to spell things out for you in detail (I figure some readers can use some of their imagination and impart their own meaning... etc etc but we've had this conversation before, so anyway..) 5: Cmon now, you might be using the title "everyone", but don't start thinking that you actually know what people do to celebrate victory.. and the hobos I know? burb sour beer and pass out rather than growl. 6: the connection between blue-collar blues and growling.. isn't a concept thats too hard to grasp. (denial? etc etc, really DO I HAVE TO EXPLAIN? No. And I won't.) 7: Your welcome, whatever helps that frustration of yours. And HOLY JESU!?! YOU LOVE IT!!! Thanks for the ten. Toodles.
Re: Snowflake by fevriere	12-Jan-04/2:42 PM
Other than comparing her to a snowflake? the poem was pretty good. And it'll be better when you get rid of the snowflake, IMHO. eight.
Re: The Blues by fevriere	12-Jan-04/2:40 PM
Not bad.. seven.
Re: a comment on The Blues by fevriere	12-Jan-04/2:39 PM
poetry is not non-sensical by nature.. if that was true, you could write complete gibberish and call it poetry. "ga ga sluurp hiss hiss buurp and did a bird chiiirp wakaboo 'n green goo?" [Nobel Prize Winner!!!! NO?] Hang could go anyway.. since words like "cling" would be a better alternative.
Re: Just A Dream by Blindpoetry	12-Jan-04/2:24 PM
Whats wrong with you? Forgot to eat fish & chicken liver for breakfast? Strike one. Keep swinging the oakclub until you hit home or strikeout.
Re: a comment on Malaysia by Crakyamuni	12-Jan-04/1:48 PM
Even tigers sometimes purr.
Re: a comment on New commandments by little_big_nose	12-Jan-04/1:35 PM
You should post a series. Really, you'd be a ranker hit in no time.
Re: a comment on New commandments by little_big_nose	12-Jan-04/1:33 PM
Well, not even horus or me can manage to mispell "thou".. (then again, whats the point of using the word thou? now-a-days its just one of those overused 'n abused words used in an attempt to sound meaningfull and ceremonious.) You have to be a brilliant moron to pull that off. Honestly. Especially since this poems substance is utterly idiotic and encased in horse shit. No-one here can come close to a brilliant dunce like LBN, or his stupefied poetry.
Re: a comment on New commandments by little_big_nose	12-Jan-04/1:15 PM
your comment, not little big nose's poem
Re: a comment on New commandments by little_big_nose	12-Jan-04/1:15 PM
10, and damn brilliant.