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Dance in my Golden Shower (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer
Yes, my legs quiver with joy as this amber rivulet douses your indignant expression and drips off your cheeks. Its a euphoric sight to see- somewhat erotic when you squint and answer the sting with a groan; muttering in your discomposure to convey your dissent. Theres no trace of shame in my wry grin, Not a hint of regret in these twinkling eyes; as always I remain blithe and amused. Blame yourself, for relaxing my bladder and the resulting laughter. You danced for rain- it fell as golden streamlets of warmth, disinfecting your foul voice and putrid feet; appreciate the free shower and know this: You shall never be clean until you're tinged amber and left glistening.

Up the ladder: Come home

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.875
Weighted score: 5.5042653
Overall Rank: 2636
Posted: January 6, 2004 4:27 PM PST; Last modified: January 6, 2004 4:27 PM PST
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Comments:
[9] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.72 | 6-Jan-04/4:39 PM | Reply
Um, no thanks. If it's all the same, i'll stay dirty.
[8] JoyLuck @ 65.173.32.8 | 6-Jan-04/10:46 PM | Reply
May i quench my thirst with your gatorade?
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.163.1 > JoyLuck | 7-Jan-04/12:42 AM | Reply
Ofcourse, but it will cost you 50$. ;]

Long time no see bastage.
[9] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.52 | 7-Jan-04/7:58 AM | Reply
gross.

having the spinach and the vitamin first was just plain evil.
[n/a] Don-Quixote @ 66.53.161.152 > Shuushin | 7-Jan-04/8:12 AM | Reply
Why, thank you :)

Hey, whats your take on waiting to inhale?
[9] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.72 | 8-Jan-04/12:50 PM | Reply
Other countries wallow in their own pee because they have no "indoor plumbing". Still others, who have "proper receptacles", bathe in pee for entertainment purposes. No irony there, ha!
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.162.170 > INTRANSIT | 10-Jan-04/4:20 PM | Reply
In the past sailors would clean wounds by pissing on them.
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