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Dance in my Golden Shower (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

Yes, my legs quiver with joy as this amber rivulet douses your indignant expression and drips off your cheeks. Its a euphoric sight to see- somewhat erotic when you squint and answer the sting with a groan; muttering in your discomposure to convey your dissent. Theres no trace of shame in my wry grin, Not a hint of regret in these twinkling eyes; as always I remain blithe and amused. Blame yourself, for relaxing my bladder and the resulting laughter. You danced for rain- it fell as golden streamlets of warmth, disinfecting your foul voice and putrid feet; appreciate the free shower and know this: You shall never be clean until you're tinged amber and left glistening.

INTRANSIT 8-Jan-04/12:50 PM
Other countries wallow in their own pee because they have no "indoor plumbing". Still others, who have "proper receptacles", bathe in pee for entertainment purposes. No irony there, ha!




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