Re: Playing Russian roulette with a tuna cassarole By JFK by horus8	22-Jun-03/9:45 PM
Extremely amusing, I started to cry when I found it hard to stop laughing. Slightly confusing though, or maybe thats just me. blesed with an 8, go in peace.
Re: 86'd by Bachus	22-Jun-03/9:52 PM
I LOVE IT... *drool*
Re: Wigging out by Jeremi B. Handrinos	22-Jun-03/9:56 PM
Interesting :) -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Jun-03/4:18 AM
interesting, slightly confusing though, i like it oh clever birdie. 8
Re: Hazy days by cleverdevice	23-Jun-03/4:22 AM
sad and beautifull song of love never realized only dreamed or so it seems.. -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Jun-03/4:26 AM
hmmm By The Way: wht = why? And the poem is very vague.. seems like a fragment of something that can be much more than what it is.
Re: A Gordian knot (Some dirt on a friend of mine) by Bachus	23-Jun-03/5:51 AM
Im.. not exactly sure how to answer as certain things mentioned act like a fucking mirror.. but this wont scare me, it only drives me insane into a task of getting to know you, wondering if perhaps that will be permitted.. You speak of seeing the future.. You speak of a boy that looks at a room and breaks it down into code (striking me with shock as i remember childhood memories) you strike at the core of my own name sir, suprisingly.. Now i understand.. yes, i do, for as i was signing up for this i had dejavu, i now remember the flash i had.. well man, with your potions you see into the void of what will be, but i wonder if you can see the whirlpools of time, chaos storms that have no cut clear result as to a persons fate. I see without magic potions (hope i didnt take a metaphore too seriously) I have only recently awakened from the chains of my soul and mind.. now i wonder what exactly you have in the name of dream to present to this mystics table..
Re: Pilgrimage by Christof	23-Jun-03/7:59 AM
interesting, good imagery. ill bless thee with a -7-
Re: The Dry Wash by Kitch	23-Jun-03/8:04 AM
calming vision.. its like the sigh expressed after sex.. hmm what to bless you with.. ill give this a -6-
Re: Playing Russian roulette with a tuna cassarole By JFK by horus8	23-Jun-03/8:39 AM
Ok man, i read them side by side and almost died.. you tried to kill me leaving my dead body with a disturbing grin!! how dare you commit such sin! fucking a, your a genius. from 8 to 10
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Jun-03/10:09 AM
floating along the shore.. i saw a fragmented dream.. it was this and now i say that: Nice start.. no finish.. confused and vague.. i cant even figure out what the fuck this poem is even talking about. its like a sudden burp that i sometimes do and save to make a complete piece. come back when you can connect your pen with that brain..
Re: the nature of our stillborn by Crakyamuni	23-Jun-03/10:12 AM
simple, to the point.. could use more imagination.. ill save my vote in the hope that this sees an expansion and a rewrite
Re: Save Me by Freethinker1602	23-Jun-03/11:55 AM
yes lost soul we have the power to make it fall.. thats not special, the blessed have that too.. but we have the power to see beyond good and evil through the core of pure sinners suffering.. to make it fall yes, but its what we can create from the ashes that is true when it comes to foolish illusions such as power.. despite some imagination lacking in this poem, im going to bless it with an 8
Re: only pleasure left by richa	24-Jun-03/6:50 PM
Indeed, beautiful work.
Re: I fucked my sister (2 She's pregnant!) by <{Baba^Yaga}>	25-Jun-03/3:28 AM
what the fuck is this, rerun of poetic failure? miserable and without any taste.. humoristic? fuck no man, what the hell.. hillbilly poetry folks, welcome to the next millennium.
Re: TeEn PoEtRy ShOlD dIe by teenpoetryshoulddie	25-Jun-03/3:33 AM
We would be in a world with alot less stupid things to laugh at... I think that would get a little boring. Ah well, not all teen poetry sucks.
Re: Twenty Cigarette Burns Ago by DurtKL	25-Jun-03/3:36 AM
Sad, yes it is when women do such things.
Re: Bittersweet Emotions by buzzkilled	25-Jun-03/4:01 AM
hrmmm. you have a long road ahead, yes yes, just dont run out of gas, and make sure the engine sees a mechanic, perhaps oil change would improve performance and why is the left blinker broken? -pulled over- I bless it with 5
Re: Being Queer (Lyric) by Twiggy by <{Baba^Yaga}>	25-Jun-03/9:52 PM
Ok, here I crumble. But im going to stick to my opinion about the sister poem. If that means becoming the poetic punchline of the day, week, month (or however long that may be) then so be it.
Re: Tommy, an opera in D minor, by Vagina the 3 legg'd pigeon by <{Baba^Yaga}>	25-Jun-03/10:25 PM
Ouch. One thing: Hermann Hesse, not Carl Jung. Though Carl Jung if i remember correctly did do some therapy for hermann.. Interesting overview, yes, indeed, quick and easy.. but I'm sorry for not providing more bullets.