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Hazy days (Free verse) by cleverdevice
The bitter smell of dry tarmac and a rainbow shimmering in the spray
from a sprinkler reminds me of her.
Canvas clad deckchairs spring memories of hot days and cold drinks,
sprawling in the blaze.
The Sun bronzed us as I waited for something to happen. It never did.
Now I'm left with echos of a girl who's features are etched on some
distant part of my mind. And, as I can never lose them, I cannot
encourage them furthur. Look but don't touch.
One day I might find her but until then, recollections are all that I'll
have left of my summer of love.
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Posted: March 26, 2003 12:44 PM PST; Last modified: June 23, 2003 3:13 AM PDT
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"I'll have left of my summer of love."
I have left of my summer in love.