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dazed (Free verse) by nolan
dazed, confused and tired of existance i thought there could be something real the harsh reality is that it is pain and so on my crutch i lean it keeps me strong when people keep breaking me with you i feel safe, and important without you i am alone, fearfull and useless i can say so much my actions can never follow through you've never met anyone like me that will never set this soul free oh why can't i learn to live like you why is everything tearing me down i have no worth, nothing to offer i want it all i need it now i could use a vacant stare here and there the silence listen to that it will tell you everything you need because soon that will be you and I i've said i believe in you can you believe in what i say the truth hurts lies kill i say good-bye with this pill

Up the ladder: Hazy days
Down the ladder: A Little Too Long

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10106
Posted: March 28, 2003 10:54 AM PST; Last modified: March 28, 2003 10:54 AM PST
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Comments:
[7] trina_marie_73 @ 202.128.19.4 | 29-Mar-03/7:13 AM | Reply
nice :)
[9] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 | 29-Mar-03/8:03 AM | Reply
Wasn't expecting the ending. You slipped that one right past me. Though it makes sense. -9-
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