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dazed (Free verse) by nolan
dazed, confused and tired of existance
i thought there could be something real
the harsh reality is that it is pain
and so on my crutch i lean
it keeps me strong when people keep breaking me
with you i feel safe, and important
without you i am alone, fearfull and useless
i can say so much
my actions can never follow through
you've never met anyone like me
that will never set this soul free
oh why can't i learn to live like you
why is everything tearing me down
i have no worth, nothing to offer
i want it all
i need it now
i could use a vacant stare here and there
the silence
listen to that
it will tell you everything you need
because soon that will be you and I
i've said i believe in you
can you believe in what i say
the truth hurts
lies kill
i say good-bye with this pill
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10106
Posted: March 28, 2003 10:54 AM PST; Last modified: March 28, 2003 10:54 AM PST
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