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A Little Too Long (Free verse) by calilegzzz
How can I tell you When you never seem to understand You dont like who I'm not You don't like who I am All I ever wanted was for you too love me Accept who I am Forget what I can't be I tried to grow up I tried to be strong Seems I've been trying A little too long I tell you I need you You say you don't care My love is dying Your love ain't there How can I tell you The pain you can give Leaving me crying With no will to live So I hide my feelings Right or wrong Seems I've been hideing A little too long

Up the ladder: dazed
Down the ladder: ??? Ever ???

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10102
Posted: March 31, 2003 4:28 PM PST; Last modified: March 31, 2003 4:28 PM PST
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[10] kthulah @ 80.230.47.221 | 31-Mar-03/8:29 PM | Reply
I like it :)
[1] maffy @ 62.105.88.10 | 1-Apr-03/4:14 AM | Reply
DOGSHIT
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