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Save Me (Free verse) by Freethinker1602 I'm just a freak save me
From my own wretched fate
And bring my faults to light
The sooner they are exposed
The less time they have to heal
Once again reopened to the pain
Each day, my life is pieced together
Each day until I am finally worhty
To see my reflection with out a tear
My redemption from the sins and pain
Again getting past all the pain
This is what will truly heal me
Raise hands all us sinners
for we are not alone
As one strength we have the power
To make the world fall
Up the ladder:
where did it go.. venice?
Down the ladder:
Friends?
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Posted: June 23, 2003 10:36 AM PDT; Last modified: June 23, 2003 10:36 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.8013287 Overall Rank: 11086 Comments:
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SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.165.23
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23-Jun-03/11:55 AM
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yes lost soul we have the power to make it fall.. thats not special, the blessed have that too.. but we have the power to see beyond good and evil through the core of pure sinners suffering.. to make it fall yes, but its what we can create from the ashes that is true when it comes to foolish illusions such as power.. despite some imagination lacking in this poem, im going to bless it with an 8
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