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Save Me (Free verse) by Freethinker1602

I'm just a freak save me From my own wretched fate And bring my faults to light The sooner they are exposed The less time they have to heal Once again reopened to the pain Each day, my life is pieced together Each day until I am finally worhty To see my reflection with out a tear My redemption from the sins and pain Again getting past all the pain This is what will truly heal me Raise hands all us sinners for we are not alone As one strength we have the power To make the world fall

SupremeDreamer 23-Jun-03/11:55 AM
yes lost soul we have the power to make it fall.. thats not special, the blessed have that too.. but we have the power to see beyond good and evil through the core of pure sinners suffering.. to make it fall yes, but its what we can create from the ashes that is true when it comes to foolish illusions such as power.. despite some imagination lacking in this poem, im going to bless it with an 8




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