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Bittersweet Emotions (Free verse) by buzzkilled
Another heart broken, another liar revealed Nobody will ever know, my thoughts remain concealed All friends gone now, nowhere close to turn The flame has been put out now, my heart will no longer burn Little did i think of me, or what i wanted from her Sitting here pondering, what she wanted was a blur Too much time apart, too much time together All my feelings gathered up, blown away just like a feather No one here to talk to, much reason to complain Everyday without her, everyday on my head, the rain Couldn't have told me sooner, all the thing she didn't feel Life seems different now, don't know when I'll heal Not caring at all, always loving the last Big shock to me, a loud shotgun blast Telling things that hurt more and more, telling me things i wish not to know My world is destroyed now, don't know where to go

Up the ladder: Fetch
Down the ladder: Glass Flowers

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7524
Posted: June 23, 2003 11:17 PM PDT; Last modified: June 23, 2003 11:17 PM PDT
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Comments:
[7] XangryXblondeX @ 67.163.157.103 | 24-Jun-03/11:10 AM | Reply
wow dude i like that alot ur pretty good
[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 24-Jun-03/11:26 AM | Reply
Wow dude, next time, use both barrels.
[0] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > horus8 | 24-Jun-03/4:23 PM | Reply
I can't believe you still gave it a six?
[5] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.168.70 | 25-Jun-03/4:01 AM | Reply
hrmmm. you have a long road ahead, yes yes, just dont run out of gas, and make sure the engine sees a mechanic, perhaps oil change would improve performance
and why is the left blinker broken? -pulled over-

I bless it with 5
[8] Brian Tiensvold @ 66.141.123.216 | 25-Jun-03/11:49 PM | Reply
it's good.
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