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Bittersweet Emotions (Free verse) by buzzkilled
Another heart broken, another liar revealed
Nobody will ever know, my thoughts remain concealed
All friends gone now, nowhere close to turn
The flame has been put out now, my heart will no longer burn
Little did i think of me, or what i wanted from her
Sitting here pondering, what she wanted was a blur
Too much time apart, too much time together
All my feelings gathered up, blown away just like a feather
No one here to talk to, much reason to complain
Everyday without her, everyday on my head, the rain
Couldn't have told me sooner, all the thing she didn't feel
Life seems different now, don't know when I'll heal
Not caring at all, always loving the last
Big shock to me, a loud shotgun blast
Telling things that hurt more and more, telling me things i wish not to
know
My world is destroyed now, don't know where to go
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7527
Posted: June 23, 2003 11:17 PM PDT; Last modified: June 23, 2003 11:17 PM PDT
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